SomeRandomWriter In reply to ??? [2017-06-23 19:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Yeah I can give you one but I want you to give yourself one first. I have been doing this for a while and know a good character when I see it

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 19:31:17 +0000 UTC]

I think she is something like 7...8/10 I can't put a 10/10 because it would not be honest and compared to real life, we can't use magic power or spells or whatever and pink hair aren't a natural hair colors, but except this, if we consider only her true story and not fantasy fan service part, I think she between 7 and 8/10

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 19:46:03 +0000 UTC]

I am not making fun of you just trying to help you out my OC was WAY worse than your before I changed him for the better. Don't take it personally ok? 😅

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]

don't worry x)
As I said several times before, everyone has his/her own opinion and we have to be able to listen them ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:39:43 +0000 UTC]

Also no naughty stuff in my thing your OC and mine what nothing to do with one another romantically. Although he could pick her up if he wanted to but I am sure you don't want to read naughty stuff like that

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:57:06 +0000 UTC]

I can read all stuffs you want ^^
Don't forget what kind of picture I create x)
No kind of story could disgust me ^^
Write whatever you want I'm open minded for all things ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 21:14:52 +0000 UTC]

Perfect you want to find s woman with jugs like your OC? Just curious

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 21:32:14 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean ? 

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 22:23:13 +0000 UTC]

Do you want your lover to have large breasts? I would prefer it but I really want somebody I can do life with

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 23:37:20 +0000 UTC]

I'm a girl ^^ so my lover will not have boobs ^^ and I already have a boyfriend ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 00:32:36 +0000 UTC]

Also have you ever had some kind of supernatural experience seen something you can't explain?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 00:34:10 +0000 UTC]

Maybe with the wind, my best friend (a guy) is always seems to be accompanied to the wind it's very strange

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 01:05:34 +0000 UTC]

What do you mean?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 08:47:13 +0000 UTC]

When he doing something important, or just come to somes place where was no wind, suddendly the wind wake up and blow and it wasn't only one time

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:13:09 +0000 UTC]

oh thats pretty wierd cool!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 18:14:04 +0000 UTC]

weird ? why ? 

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 00:31:10 +0000 UTC]

I did not know that sorry!🤦‍♂️do you like being a girl, I hope your bf treats you well!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 00:32:53 +0000 UTC]

yes no problems about that ^^
But we can still talk together like before no need to worry about this ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 01:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Alright cool say between you and me what is it like having breasts. I am a guy so I wouldn't know, I am also very curious

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 08:45:42 +0000 UTC]

It's normal I guess like guys to have other thing in other place x)

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Nice inuendo I get what you mean I like my women to hve a little more on the top if you catch my drift

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 18:13:24 +0000 UTC]

I guess I get it ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:15:35 +0000 UTC]

because boobs anyway send me a private message so many other messages are confusing!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 18:16:06 +0000 UTC]

oh ok x)

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Gr8 dose she like acting/looking sexy because it seams she doesn't mind showing some skin

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:39:15 +0000 UTC]

She just like beautiful clothes and so somes of them let show somes part of skins, and she don't think she is obligate to hide because she don't have shame to have, it's not like if she was naked (if we stay on her original true story and minds)

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 01:07:12 +0000 UTC]

So she basically dosent care how much people see?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 08:44:44 +0000 UTC]

She care about peoples opinion or look but she don't want to limit her act and what she like to do or wearing just for this ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:12:09 +0000 UTC]

oh cool!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 18:12:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you seems to like this answer ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:14:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey send me notes from now on I can't check your previous messages to see the context so send me a not with all our conversations in it ok?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 18:15:46 +0000 UTC]

about those comments ? 

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 18:17:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes doing this is confusing for me lol

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 19:37:10 +0000 UTC]

I would give her a six mainly because the "revenge" plot point is overdone and not very entertaining anymore. Plus you have never given me any real character flaws like lust wrath and envy. Flaws make a character and are the most important thing about them from A writing standpoint. Her powers are cool but I would change her appearance to make her more realistic. Unless everyone in that universe looks like that then it's fine. I am not making fun of your OC or anything like that I am giving you advice on how to make her better. She has potential you just need to work on her some. Not trying to hurt your feelings I just want to help you out is all

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 19:46:57 +0000 UTC]

I gave you real flaws ^^
She just isn't someone lust, wrath or have envy, she is just someone happy in general, honest with everyone and proud of her choice in general and shy too; for the revenge point, maybe you can see it several times but her backstory is her lost of her whole family and friend except one, who don't want to take revenge on the murder ? 

Don't worry I'm not hurting and I thank you for your honesty and thx for saying she has somes potentials ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 19:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh and the my family's dead so now I will have revenge is boring as well. Out of all the major flaws I could give her Envy would be most realistic. Most women like her are envious even when that envy doesn't make sense oh and if I write you something will you put it on your profile?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:12:39 +0000 UTC]

Are you there ? 

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:23:41 +0000 UTC]

Yeah you can answer my question if you want

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:24:06 +0000 UTC]

I already answered

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:24:39 +0000 UTC]

You did? Do it again I didn't get it

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:31:40 +0000 UTC]

It's done, I receive your questions after your comment where you said I can answer to your question ^^"
maybe a DA bug 

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:34:05 +0000 UTC]

Right

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 19:51:02 +0000 UTC]

What kind of thing you think about writing ? 
I can put it on my profile I guess... you mean my profile introduction with my tastes, interest etc...

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Just a funny excerpt from the bigger story I will be writing for you. It's pretty funny I think you will like it!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:30:51 +0000 UTC]

I'm impatient to look at it ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:32:18 +0000 UTC]

I have to write it first!

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-23 20:37:48 +0000 UTC]

yes ofc ^^

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-24 01:07:53 +0000 UTC]

Get working on it now I will have to edit it could you feature the excerpt on your profile?

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Edits-and-Pm-Creator In reply to SomeRandomWriter [2017-06-24 08:43:31 +0000 UTC]

Yes of course

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SomeRandomWriter In reply to Edits-and-Pm-Creator [2017-06-23 20:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Like feature it and recommend people check my profile out and watch me!

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