Drewlamarre1 In reply to IPIetya [2013-12-31 18:07:56 +0000 UTC]

I wrote and produced a short film is called, THE THREE SUSPECTS. And I've enclosed a link for you at: 















www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlGUsYrRdeU  































Let me know what you think?

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JasonMasters In reply to Drewlamarre1 [2015-04-09 03:24:01 +0000 UTC]

I watched it and was unimpressed.  The acting and camera work isn't bad, but the direction sucks.  I had no idea what it was supposed to be about until I read the note you added.  It looks like a segment randomly lifted out of a story and which is therefore totally missing any context.

A good story, regardless of the medium used to present it, tells the viewer what the story is about.  Your short film fails in that essential element.

I'm sorry that most of what I have to say about the film is negative, but I'm trying to be honest with my opinion and give reasons for that opinion, so that you can improve.

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IPIetya In reply to Drewlamarre1 [2013-12-31 18:44:09 +0000 UTC]

I've watched it. I think it is pretty good.

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Drewlamarre1 In reply to kastrishis [2013-12-31 17:23:30 +0000 UTC]

I wrote and produced a short film is called, THE THREE SUSPECTS. And I've enclosed a link for you at: 















www.youtube.com/watch?v=GlGUsYrRdeU  































Let me know what you think?

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