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LegoBronyClockwork
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[2017-02-12 00:37:28 +0000 UTC]
"Certified Loner"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 121; Deviations: 396; Watchers: 80
Watching: 55; Pageviews: 10454; Comments Made: 1015; Friends: 55
# Interests
Favorite visual artist: NoneFavorite movies: Lord of the Rings, Dungeons and Dragons: Honor Among Thieves, The Great Race
Favorite TV shows: Ed, Edd, n Eddy, Murder Drones
Favorite bands / musical artists: Crywank
Favorite books: Legend of Drizzt, The Hobbit
Favorite writers: JRR Tolkien
Favorite games: Dungeons and Dragons, Team Fortress 2, Plants vs Zombies Garden Warfare 2, Overwatch
Favorite gaming platform: Steam
Tools of the Trade: Pen and Paper, FireAlpaca
Other Interests: Programming
# Social Links
https://x.com/LB_Clockworkhttps://www.youtube.com/@dicehaven7400
# Comments
Comments: 47
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The story seems good so far. I don't think when I'm writing so I don't know what to tell you on how to improve. I do think you should write about the surrounding more, like if the walls are covered in picture tell what the pictures show. You need to build the world so you know what you are going to do with the characters. To be honest, I think I should be asking you for writing advice -w-'
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Other than that, it's a good story
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And so...
Thanks you for all favs!Β AndΒ amazing comments!Β It means a lot to me!
And sorry for my English >///<
Your fanarts are also fantastic! ^w^Β
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