LightofDharc In reply to Zgriffen1 [2012-07-12 16:06:56 +0000 UTC]

Ok course oh ya read this from the book i am writing, it is one section of my story, (like 1/100), that include some of your OCs (3/100)



“Well…this is…pretty empty…” He looked the building, it was Red and had a sign that Read MAY-DAY cavern and bar, with the world __FAMOUS MAYLU JUNE. There was writing on it that looked painted over, they looked at it but moved on. They walked in and saw a woman eating plates of food with her bare hands, shoveling the food into her mouth. Myra held her hand over her mouth like she was going to puke. Beside her there was others who watched were eating with her, a guy who looked like her but seemed more polite and ate the food with a fork and knife. And across was a guy who looked almost exactly like Rayna at their school, the girl who was cheering for Light. Beside him was Shine who was talking to a girl who was the waiter who had long red hair with pigtails. She wore Chinese dress with small waves designed on it.
“NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM!!” was the sound coming from the girl who was devouring the food; she was eating what looked like a grey paste. She ate plate after plate, and her eyes where crossed so it look like she saw both sides of the room, she had a metal bat be her side, her hair was blonde with one small part curling out, she also had on a jacket that rolled to the fore-arm, and shorts, and had shoulder and knees pads. Her brother looked at her in disgust, and sighed, he had short hair and had what look like a mechanic’s clothing on, they both had long ears like that of elves.

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Zgriffen1 In reply to LightofDharc [2012-07-12 23:13:09 +0000 UTC]

Jen sure loves Maylu cooking, no matter how deadly it is.XD Sounds good so far! Are you going to be posting on DA or are you going to keep it to yourself?

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LightofDharc In reply to Zgriffen1 [2012-07-13 02:19:35 +0000 UTC]

maybe

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LightofDharc In reply to LightofDharc [2012-07-12 16:10:48 +0000 UTC]

XD don't make fun of my lack of spelling i know i am REALLY bad at it

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LightofDharc In reply to Zgriffen1 [2012-07-12 16:01:03 +0000 UTC]

Nothing much

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