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TheOneForgotten
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[2005-08-29 16:34:50 +0000 UTC]
"Not as Forgotten as you Think"
(United States)
# Statistics
Favourites: 2247; Deviations: 288; Watchers: 38
Watching: 96; Pageviews: 14158; Comments Made: 1133; Friends: 96
# Interests
Favorite movies: Shutter Island, Tim Burton filmsFavorite TV shows: Cupcake Wars, Jockeys, Say Yes to the Dress
Favorite bands / musical artists: Motion City Soundtrack, Lady Gaga, Good Charlotte
Favorite books: Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy, Mop Men
Favorite writers: Jane Austen
Favorite games: Pokemon
Favorite gaming platform: Nintendo DS
Tools of the Trade: Pencils, Prisma Colored Pencils, Pens , Erasers
Other Interests: Reading, Writing, Horses
# About me
I've been drawing for most of my life, a little dabbling in some high school art classes but haven't had any "real" training. At the moment I'm in college for something that has nothing to do with art, and am simply drawing to release stress and have another hobby to accompany reading and my horse obsession.
# Comments
Comments: 161
Are you okay?
I haven't heard from you in ages ...
I hope you're doing well!
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Thank you for adding my work to your favourites!
www.facebook.com/andresbestardβ¦
www.andresbestard.com.ar
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No problem!
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No problem! Don't know why I didn't watch you sooner!
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Oh thank you so much!
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its no problem
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Hey thanks a lot for faving my comic!
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No problem!
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Thanks for the favourite on A day at the Races -the finish
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No problem! It deserved it!
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Thanks so much for the fav [link] ! It truly means a lot to me 
I am sorry i am late in responding! I fail..
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No problem! I think that you may want to check out some pictures of horses with halters and see how they lay on the face. While your horse is rendered well, I think that the halter lays flat and feels a little out of place. Halters aren't generally stable when the horse is in motion (unless fitted tightly) so you usually see some kind of bounce/movement, even if it's the clip part. I'd also like to see a little less realism in the background if you're going to make a cartoon rendering of the horse. The background is lovely, and I actually really like some of the detail that you've achieved in it, but I would say that the flat colors on your horse clashes with that. Maybe adding some shading to your horse would even out the balance. It looks like you went with flat colors to avoid the piece being too busy (which is actually a nice decision) but maybe adding a little less detail to the background and more detail to your subject will shift the focus to where you want it. Right now I notice the horse because he is in front, but then my eye loses him and I start focusing on the background details. You've also added the shadows to the background but not to the horse. Shading the horse will really help the piece as a whole.
Hopefully that helped! Let me know if you have any questions or want me to explain myself more on something.
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