User1291 In reply to shineytrooper [2016-09-24 10:28:39 +0000 UTC]

Hi Shiney
Can't promise you anything definite, yet, but I promise I won't keep you waiting too long.
Glad you're enjoying what I've written, so far, though.

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shineytrooper In reply to User1291 [2016-10-26 21:56:22 +0000 UTC]

hey will we ever see ahsoka slave dress again and also any updates on the fanfic?

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User1291 In reply to shineytrooper [2016-10-26 21:58:20 +0000 UTC]

Been kind of busy, lately, but I promise I'm still writing on it.
Will think about the slave dress.

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shineytrooper In reply to User1291 [2016-11-14 00:40:59 +0000 UTC]

about how far have you got with the script?

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User1291 In reply to shineytrooper [2016-11-14 05:15:02 +0000 UTC]

The next chapter is more or less planned out, I just need to find the time to write it all down.
Hoping to post it by the end of the month.

Think I have an idea on how to make use of the slave dress in the chapter after that, too.

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shineytrooper In reply to User1291 [2016-12-03 05:16:10 +0000 UTC]

wow dude this chapter was amazing I loved the inclusion of furn and its a shame obiwankenobie will stop doing modeling

And I also have to say your writing has improved it was good before but its awesome now how ever I did find it hard to follow
the scene changes... it might just be me though

and you made me laugh plenty of times I did not expect crystal and barriss and I also think that your setting someone up to die
and I think its crystal or one of the assassins

I also liked the inclusion of ahsoka being able to sense peoples intentions and feelings like it was said in the ahsoka novel

Cant wait for the next chapter you got me hyped lol damnamit I hate cliff hangers  

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User1291 In reply to shineytrooper [2016-12-03 09:33:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the feedback.

Concerning finding it hard to follow the scene changes, did you start reading very soon after I've posted the chapter (like within 15min after the notification was sent)?
Because I forgot that uploading the document to FF.net will erase the horizontal lines across the pages that I inserted in my local file to make the scene changes obvious, so I had to fix that when the notification was already out. -.-
Or was there a different reason you had trouble following the scene changes?

I must admit, I have not yet read the Ahsoka novel.
It's on my TODO list, though. 

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shineytrooper In reply to User1291 [2016-09-24 13:18:52 +0000 UTC]

yeah habari recommended it to me and its the best fanfiction i have read to date
and better than the current cannon version of ahsokas story after wrong jedi

I wanted to do some art on arkee and crystal but i dont really know what they
look like so ill have to go off my imagination

plus i cant wait for the new chapter... what will happen, what will ahsokas reaction
to yoda be.... will arkee die again? (i hope not)

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User1291 In reply to shineytrooper [2016-09-24 13:33:42 +0000 UTC]

Heh, thank you. Feel free to spread the word. I can always use a few readers more.

Can't tell you what will happen (wouldn't really be fair to all the others), but if you need visual clues for your own art, I have commissioned a couple of pics that can provide a hint or two:
Arkee: raikoh-illust.deviantart.com/a…
Crystal: raikoart.deviantart.com/art/Sk…
The whole trio: bakki.deviantart.com/art/Commi…
You are welcome, of course, to ignore these and draw them like you imagine them based on my descriptions.

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shineytrooper In reply to User1291 [2016-09-24 14:24:08 +0000 UTC]

how did you come up with the idea of the story?

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