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[2017-12-23 17:28:48 +0000 UTC]
(Puerto Rico)
# Statistics
Favourites: 333; Deviations: 95; Watchers: 35
Watching: 67; Pageviews: 3996; Comments Made: 1084; Friends: 67
# About me
Oh, hello there n.n this is me. You may know me as Erebus for now. I usually focus on writing since it's easier for me, but I somtimes mess around with the mouse and make some digital art. You can go around and see what I make. If you like what I do and want to read more, just give me a watch. I usually upload weekly.
# Comments
Comments: 42
Thank you Storm
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Thank you for the fave, I hope you enjoy the comic
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Bro, i have the prologue of my creepypasta:Β Godzilla The killer Kaiju prologue. Β it contains blood and some screams (but i not sure about scary parts but well, its the prologue) but i hope you like it.
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I read. You have quite a ways to go, but I'm sure you can handle it. It's not catching my interest, though...
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so... what i got to do? i want to make this story with pretty horror and some accion.
what i got to do for catch your interest?
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Unfortunately, I haven't been into Godzilla stuff, so, I think it is best to aim for a certain type of audience. If your story has Godzilla in it, you'd bet people that want to see more Godzilla stuff will likely find more interest.
It's super early to judge what needs to be improved. I'd suggest for now on working on grammar, punctuation, spelling, and online formatting. For example (online formatting), putting "" between the text that indicates dialogue, so people can easily tell what is dialogue and what is narration.
That would be the first piece of advice I'd give, for now.
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ok ok. i'll just continue with the story but aim for people that like Godzilla, like some of my friends.
i will try to put more horror and blood on it.
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Yeppy. Good luck with it!
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Okay. I'll get to reading ASAP
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hi bro! i'm writing a story, a creepypasta, named, Godzilla The Killer Kaiju, it is still in progress, here is:Β The start part from my Godzilla Creepypasta.
and that is, i need some help with ideas and help for write. and you are a good option because you make very good stories
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I can see you Veroxyde 
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Nice to greet ya andΒ guten Nachmittag.
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Same here and buenas noches!
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No problem. I liked what you did there in Electric Friends, so I thought I'd stay on to your art to keep seeing your future images.
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Thanks for the favorite! I hope you like the other contents of our accoun x3
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No problem. Thanks for the watch and favorite n.n
Hope you like the stories I write.
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If you want to see our works, do not forget to leave us a Watch :3
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Nice, I'll do it then n.n
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Thanks for the watch and support! I hope you enjoy my content!
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Thanks. Hope you too!
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Thx for the watch ^^ i can guess why you did it and itβs appreciated, tho i want you to know that i donβt do watch for watch, so if i watch u that means you earned it ^^ please donβt be mad
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Okay, I didn't do the watch because of "watch for watch", I did it for similar reasons you said, though my version is that I found your stuff interesting.
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Thx ^^ and i was just making sure
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(forgot to add in previous post)
I usually don't do this due to lack of success of doing this (tried it in YouTube, not doing this again), so I simply use subs as an amount of people who want to keep seeing my stuff, so the amount of watchers would be used somewhat similarly?
I prefer to use feedback and pageviews as a tracking method to the amount of people who've entered the page and the amount of people who watched this, and their feedback to see how well I'm executing things.
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No problem. I couldn't see the comic on the mobile app, so I thought I might as well give a watch so I can check your stuff later.
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Thanks a ton for the watch! It means a lot to me!
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No problem! And right now, it seems worth it, since the stories you're writing are quite enjoyable.
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Yay! Thatβs wonderful to hear
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No prob, have you checked out my stories? I'm pretty much starting out so I don't have much yet...
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