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[2007-10-09 14:24:19 +0000 UTC]
"Sky Tesi"
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# Comments
Comments: 125
Hey. We should be friends. <3 <3
Or we should be mortal enemies.
You pick, I could use a new nemesis.
Or a new pal.
Muwahhahahahaha
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Nice. I'll check them out tomorrow.
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I know. I'm still alive, and I mean that. I'm still writing; but they're scraps and nothing else. I might post one story that's very abstract.
I'll start posting again regularly, just pulling myself off the ground right now.
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I've read about five of your stories and either I'm not getting the point or this stuff's just not my bag of crackers. Though I think they'd make some pretty kick ass short graphic stories because of the amount of visual content.
Liked 'Doin' Lines With The Devil', it was a bit more focused. The other stuff was more like a Looney Tunes gore fest. Kinda bounced all over the place and the only consistency I could find was the fact that at some point someone was going to bleed. I guess maybe the point to your stuff is that there isn't a point? Not trying to be dick here, it's a legitimate thought.
Do you practice other styles of writing?
Anyways it was at least interesting to read something different. I'm trying to expand my own skills so anything out of the ordinary is appreciated. If you get bored feel free to stomp through my writing stuff, I'd be interested in your opinions.
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You're not the first to ask what the point of the stories are. My initial intentions were to write eight novels simultaneously, but that flew about 100 miles over my head at the time. I settled for writing twisted flash fictions, because I'm so impatient to get feedback that I write very short pieces. It's difficult to fit a plot so few words, and so I often write a scene that I find interesting. I introduce the characters, show the scene, and wrap it up. The main point of the stories is to show moral diversity. Some of the stories being more obscene than others, I strive to corrupt people's morals and convince the audience to act on freewill rather than authority, tradition, and adopted morals/ethics. I'm still at work at the novels I'm writing, and I believe they'll illustrate my point much more clearly.
I'll definitely tell you my opinion of your work (prose).
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Dude, thatβs a heavy goal for anyone. And you might want to add that piece of information about your stories being scenes to your description, youβd catch less shit from people who are confused and expecting a complete work.
Your goal is pretty interesting. I donβt quite agree with it, but at least you have direction and purpose with what youβre doing. Personally I see value in tradition and ethics, but I think itβs important to question them and understand them on more then face value. I try my best not to harm other people, not because other people say itβs wrong, but because I see nothing to gain from it. Everyone has different views though. Some people run around killing each other for fun, but itβs not like Iβm going to sit them down to tea and cookies and talk them out of it.
Iβll have to flip through your Ranicla stories. I think Iβll like them better after I collect a bit more understanding.
Well, Iβd like to warn you about the run on sentences and comma rape ahead of time.
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You gallery is badass. You got some serious skill man- Hands Down!
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Johnny's letter to St. Nick is hilarious. Keep up the hilarious horror!!! It'll getcha places.
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dude, are stories connected?
do i need to read them in some particular order or ...?
great stories, btw. keep it up.
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Only Ranicla (13 pieces, but you can read the pdf that is the whole thing) has a connected storyline. Everything else is a one-shot.
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have you ever written a full book?
that be cool.
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Ranicla is my longest work. It's 16k words. I'm approaching taking on a larger project. I'm interested in writing novels and even beyond that: an entire series.
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cool if you ever pub a hard or paper back tell me.
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I'd like to thank you for seriously criticizing my little short story. I'll even admit it was horrible and I'd better give it up or try again.
That was not sarcasm by the way.
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Should've started watching ages ago. Still have some digging to do.
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Hey dude:
From one shitty writer to another, you're a great writer. Plus you're an asshole, but all the people that hate you for it are assholes anyway.
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You have won a special award in the I Spy competition.
You can read all about it here.
PS I miss your pointy head. Msn me sometime.
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Hey dude, what writers do you like? Do you kick it with Vonnegut, Dostoevsky, Palahniuk, what? I'm curious as to what kind of stuff you like to read.
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It's unfortunate but I don't have any writers I'll back. Simple as that. There's no writer who I'm comfortable with siding on and giving full credit to. Sure, I like this and that, but no writer entirely enough to mention. Always on the look though.
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I just checked your D.O.B. You're actually 22!
I thought you were younger! You should grow up and start acting your age dude. All this time I thought I was talking to someone closer to my age! lol
I had no idea...
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Come back to my page when you're spitting cliche lines and acting like a mother -- then, I'll fuck you proper.
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You're sort of brilliant.
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Hmm...
You are aware you've just proved my point the the 'T'
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Is this bane2 twat annoying you?
It certainly looks that way.
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I'm still waiting for your argument.
How you can have claimed to beat somone without actually providing an argument is laughable.
But then again, maybe you don't understand the concept of debate.
Here, I'll spit it out for you...
Arguments for dummies:
Firstly one partisan puts forward his point of view.
Then the second partisan puts his counter-argument forward, explaining holes in the first's logic.
The first partisan defends his point whilst also explaining holes in the other's logic.
Continue until problem resolved.
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wow man, seriously, get a fucken life. all thats comin out of your trappa is fucken shit. i will give you a fucken debate and then we will see who can take losing well.
just face it dude, you lost, now get over it. and like you have said before about deztornmind, how he is all talk because it is over the internet, well look in the mirror mate, i bet you are all talk as well. so get off his fucken back and go find someone else to have a fucken pointless debate with.
get a fucken life mate
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Dude, 1) this was written way back in March. This argument has been finished for months.
2) It's a very small part of an incredibly long argument. Don't jump to conclusions until you've read the full argument.
3) Your grammar is fucking awful.
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you dont see your own problem, do you? all you can find in everyone around you is their faults, nothing else. that is why i am saying to you, get a life.
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You don't know me, don't think you can judge me.
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Most people don't take losing well, so it's not surprise for you to be waiting to understand what happened.
I'm guessing you want advice. Fall out of the media influx.
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Actually, what I want is for you to provide some kind of real arguments. I don't mind losing - what doesn't kill me makes me stronger - but it's hard to lose if there's nothing to lose against!
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Reread what you originally posted to me and how I responded.
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Well in that case, you must be accepting defeat...
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How gracious of you. I didn't realise you had the guts to admit you were wrong.
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How is he admiting he's wrong, fag?
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You are an insecure little rat who is going to get himself into some deep shit if he talks to people in real life the way he does on the internet. But knowing a few people like you, you're probably a different person in real life - polite, friendly, you get the gist. You wouldn't have the guts to speak like you on do on DA to my face. The internet has given you an ego and alot of the users on this site have given you room to swing it. Not any more.
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Bring the deep shit. I'll call up Grant Sick Fuck.
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Are you fatherfucking crazy or do you pretend to be?
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He has no real problems, but he likes to make believe!
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