Fluid-Motion [2006-06-27 09:41:23 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Jon-Law [2005-12-05 06:04:49 +0000 UTC]

How is it possible that I can make your 'list'? Do I showcase my work, or would you like to peer freely? I think I'm pretty good, but I want your opinion too.

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Bryianzum [2005-09-24 17:42:32 +0000 UTC]

How is it possible that I can make your 'list'? Do I showcase my work, or would you like to peer freely? I think I'm pretty good, but I want your opinion too.

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inziladun [2005-04-23 23:33:05 +0000 UTC]

Ahahahaha!!

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jesusbite [2005-02-14 00:33:47 +0000 UTC]

So, I finally got a list up and running for the Link of the Night. If you're not on it (as in, don't get this message, and you want to), shoot me a note, or leave a message or just somehow let me know. Same goes for the instance that you want off the list - please let me know.

Happiness , by .
The Interview , by .
Rusting Bridges of Suburbia , by .

So, I did some peruzing, and earthed up these three pieces.
Happiness is beautiful in its own simplicity, and has a subtle kick to it that I find lacking in a lot of reading these days.
The Interview is an interesting little for-the-stage piece that I found myself cracking up over, all over the place. There's some great humor and dialogue going on here, as well as some great subtle toss-ins for the actors to experiment with. Something I would love to see performed.
While Rusting Bridges of Suburbia might be a little ho-hum subject-wise, the rhythm and control of meter that ~ honestbrutality has accomplished here is impeccable. It takes a lot of practice and a lot of control of vocabulary to get a good rhythm in a slam piece these days, and it's done beautifully here.



Get writing, fuckos. *jesusbite

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Iwon1 [2004-11-05 10:28:41 +0000 UTC]

...why I haven't watched you before now is beyond me.

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0sphinx0 [2004-10-26 06:53:23 +0000 UTC]

you have incredible grasp of concrete detail.. you put images in my head, for that you get a watch

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jesusbite [2004-10-19 03:36:38 +0000 UTC]

So, after a long undue abscence, the Link of the Night returns. Yeah. Enjoy it while it lasts.

After looking through some of the new submissions, I couldn't find anything worthy, so I went back to my old bookmarks and looked through them, trying to find which could stand the test of time.

The pieces I chose were stunning, and still are. They could use some polish, a little TLC, but in their own right, they're golden (albiet buried under some layers of dust).

Thieves Army - Final by is a stunning (little) epic.

Dear Fellow Sagittarian by just grooves along to its own little melody.



Here is to a (triumphant?) return!

Much love, huggings, kissings, and oral sex from your pal, .

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oosighpoemoo [2004-08-27 04:26:06 +0000 UTC]

I'd like to thank you for you're overly harsh criticism on a piece of mine from sometime last year. It did -wonders- for me. I'm actually getting recognition in my own town now and making better poetry in general.

Actually. Nothing of the sort has happened. See, The point to constructive Criticism is not just to flat out tell a writer that their work is so horribly disgusting that it makes the writer wonder why the hell you even commented in the first place, noting that it was 'so horrid'. On the contrary, it'd be more fitting to actually point out a few things that could have used work and, maybe, even given out a few tips, seeing as how you're a fellow poet and everything.
So, In other words, I'm flat out telling you that you're a soul-ess bastard. If you were someone who might actually care about someone who was trying to become a writer, you wouldn't attempt to so plainly step all over their writing and spit on their pen, so to speak.

With everything said and done, I'll leave it at that. Thank you -so- much for your comment. It did WONDERS.

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catbat88 [2004-06-06 10:01:33 +0000 UTC]

I have to tell you, your poetry is amazing. Great job.

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Dragoon-Fyre [2004-05-26 20:53:07 +0000 UTC]

great work m8, keep it up!

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erwilzei [2004-05-09 04:25:24 +0000 UTC]

nice work...keep it up

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newklear [2004-04-26 08:21:40 +0000 UTC]

Holy shit, it's Uncle Phil!

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lengleng [2004-04-05 01:59:38 +0000 UTC]

so much for innocence.

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inkblotstar [2004-03-03 04:36:19 +0000 UTC]

still alive?

added.

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lengleng [2004-02-29 05:12:41 +0000 UTC]

here today too.

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rebelchic [2004-02-27 21:04:13 +0000 UTC]

I remember you.

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mrmcpheezy [2004-02-24 07:37:47 +0000 UTC]

Hey. I'm trying to set up a Sacramento dev meet. note me if you're interested.

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inebriate [2004-02-16 06:06:10 +0000 UTC]

Get back here.

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preconscious [2004-01-06 18:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Did I ever tell you about my PoTime adventures?

I got my flag at level 61, went in to get my key so i could actually get in, and got kicked out to PoI.

Nobody under 65 can get into the stupid zone.

On the bright side.. ding 64! Only like, 40 something percent to go! I might actually hit 65 before they raise the cap again! *giggle*

don't be such a stranger.

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nonculture [2004-01-01 16:08:38 +0000 UTC]

happy new year yo.

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citizenerased [2003-12-31 09:08:16 +0000 UTC]

Ello,
Thanks for making my stay on this page sweeter.
It's been lovely,the excursions into your writings.and the kind words from you.

I hope you have a great new year!


nova

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notrust [2003-12-25 18:52:17 +0000 UTC]

HAPPY CHRISTMAS AND MERRY NEW YEAR

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sto67 [2003-12-24 10:57:03 +0000 UTC]

where the hell have you been!
X|

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psychodrive [2003-12-24 07:15:23 +0000 UTC]

Merry surreptitious Christmas. If somebody dies, get drunk; if nobody dies, get drunk; if everyone dies, we're fucked.

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evilfaeries [2003-12-21 23:05:08 +0000 UTC]

To thank people for their support
and to wish them happy holidays,
I've decided to go to the pages of all 370 deviants
that are watching me, and wish you all a Merry Christmas,
Happy Hanukah or whatever it is you celebrate this time of year.
And may you all have a great New Year as well..
Make sure to make a list of new years resolutions,
and try to stick with them.

& Thank You for dev watching me,
and supporting me. You keep me going,
and help me be who I am.



Love, Kandice Michelle Plain

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undefinability [2003-12-20 03:30:57 +0000 UTC]

Hey, man, what's been going on?
It's been too long, how've you been?

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lostINyou22 [2003-12-06 05:48:10 +0000 UTC]

holy crap i think i love everything in your gallery, i'm soo bookmarking you

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punky-o [2003-12-03 16:43:02 +0000 UTC]

you probably already know but blackalicious is playing at harlowes

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inebriate [2003-11-22 05:55:48 +0000 UTC]

I like this name better.
         ~poeticks

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preconscious [2003-11-22 05:25:46 +0000 UTC]

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deviantkupo [2003-11-21 21:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god.

You're a poet.

I hate you.

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agesxracer [2003-11-18 03:34:44 +0000 UTC]

thanks. i am a math geek as well and if youre not you probably wont get it. i like your kettle brews poem.

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livingbyair [2003-11-16 06:12:25 +0000 UTC]

'hm. It lacks something. Don't ask what. But something.'

^you fart. go lick it! LICK IT!

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lilt [2003-11-15 22:16:23 +0000 UTC]

be sure to tell him that brittany says hi for me.

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generalpropaganda [2003-11-15 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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asensualmystress [2003-11-15 14:53:30 +0000 UTC]

To quote my post on aural-autumn's page:

"God, I'm an idiot. All this time I've been using : love : when it's been : heart : I wanted. Fuck."

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