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Published: 2007-04-29 06:49:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 284; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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The sky rips a holeblack as my cup of coffee
black as my daily sins
Through a sun many years ago
that was once ours before
we learned to fly
Glaring through our dusty visors
staring down at a world that
we destroyed.
If I have learned anything,
it was to dodge a bullet
and stray from an event horizon.
Comments: 6
toxic-ink [2007-05-10 02:33:12 +0000 UTC]
I'd have to say one of your better works as of late. I like the doom laden world it paints.
quite good sir quite good.
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007-BloodyAlaizabel [2007-05-06 22:50:30 +0000 UTC]
"black as my daily sins" - brilliant line.
this is quite good.
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TheAvacado [2007-05-02 03:00:06 +0000 UTC]
I liked this one. What made you want the layout to flow around like that?
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007-LoneHeartstring [2007-04-30 00:38:40 +0000 UTC]
*likes it, as usual*
[link] "Event Horizon" by Frank Sustarich. ^_~
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007-Math In reply to 007-LoneHeartstring [2007-04-30 01:03:22 +0000 UTC]
Mmmm, perspective.
Glad you liked it.
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