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The fear that stalks behindevery curtain, every wall:
the Shadows dance and the curtains fall.
As I lay
basking in the summer sun,
there comes the emptiness of a cosmic ray -
The Sun sits, staunch, and without fear:
I watch it crumple and disappear.
In a shadowless room we wait for the cold.
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Comments: 3
toxic-ink [2007-05-10 02:41:32 +0000 UTC]
you made it ryme without whoreing it out into a doctor suess mess.
I like that..some of the ryms people use make them sound like forced crap.
good thing you have talent, my eyes thank you.
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007-BloodyAlaizabel [2007-05-06 22:49:38 +0000 UTC]
yeah, i need to brush up on my rhyming as well. very nice.
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