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007-Math — The Cold
Published: 2007-04-30 01:18:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 239; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description   The fear that stalks behind
every curtain, every wall:
the Shadows dance and the curtains fall.

As I lay
basking in the summer sun,
  there comes the emptiness of a cosmic ray -
     The Sun sits, staunch, and without fear:
I watch it crumple and disappear.

    In a shadowless room we wait for the cold.
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Comments: 3

toxic-ink [2007-05-10 02:41:32 +0000 UTC]

you made it ryme without whoreing it out into a doctor suess mess.
I like that..some of the ryms people use make them sound like forced crap.

good thing you have talent, my eyes thank you.

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007-Math In reply to toxic-ink [2007-05-10 03:07:46 +0000 UTC]

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007-BloodyAlaizabel [2007-05-06 22:49:38 +0000 UTC]

yeah, i need to brush up on my rhyming as well. very nice.

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