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16woodsequ — Critic
Published: 2013-11-22 01:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 267; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Somebody stole my poetry book
And read out loud
Made fun of and mocked everything
Threw it down into the dirt
And walked all over it


I wake up screaming
Because that person was me
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Comments: 5

ImpossibleWriterGirl [2019-09-04 00:32:59 +0000 UTC]

We are our worst critic

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16woodsequ In reply to ImpossibleWriterGirl [2019-09-04 17:01:44 +0000 UTC]

H O N E S T L Y

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ImpossibleWriterGirl In reply to 16woodsequ [2019-09-04 18:13:04 +0000 UTC]

Its terrible

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Acie-kun [2013-11-23 17:35:29 +0000 UTC]

I love how you expressed yours fears and emotions through that small passage. I have the same fear of someone making fun of my work. So I always go hard on myself.
Keep up the good work!

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16woodsequ In reply to Acie-kun [2013-11-23 17:39:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.
Yeah, I always keep my poetry book close at hand.
And I'm always slightly worried about how people will react to the poem every time I post one.
Will do.

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