tk-nvme [2004-10-04 10:28:44 +0000 UTC]

tara?


and this poem is abrupt and hurtful like the emotions... but once again, too clear and upfront for my tastes. its too much like what every other person on this earth could say. maybe that's a strength. not in my book.


at least, not like this.
though. the last line is nice.


maybe because it's wrenching.

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garfield101 [2003-06-15 01:16:32 +0000 UTC]

i know what you mean when you wrote this great one btw.

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c4rri3 [2003-05-01 09:35:12 +0000 UTC]

I agree with angel.. dont let anything bring you down.. and if it does, u know where to turn

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kiwianimeangel [2002-10-24 22:47:06 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty good. Not that descriptive, but it gets the point across nonetheless. Good job overall.

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0o-elly-o0 [2002-10-19 05:56:01 +0000 UTC]

Soemtimes i wonder about that saying 'better to have loved and lost...' with all the pain it puts people through.. you gotta wonder eh?

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spinning-plates [2002-10-17 21:36:56 +0000 UTC]

I tend to stay away from situations that will end like this, so I can't say I relate, but I get a clear picture of the emotions you are trying to portray, and that alone makes it a beautiful poem.

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wildangel [2002-10-17 07:34:24 +0000 UTC]

I have to agree with what angel said. Love the poem, sweetie.

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adrift [2002-10-17 07:13:08 +0000 UTC]

It kind of gets like that sometimes. I can empathise.

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pandapirate [2002-10-17 06:55:12 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes when your so bound to one idea you close your mind to the rest of the world and forget to take in all aspects of your life... Perhaps this is the case here?

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angeldevil [2002-10-17 06:40:05 +0000 UTC]

sometimes we gotta gamble... always have that in mind

u r beautiful inside and outside hun, dont let anything bring u down

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