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6strings4Him — How Could You?
Published: 2006-10-06 16:38:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 203; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description How Could you do that to me?
I was only three,
I didn't know right from wrong,
and you took advantage of me,

I've always blamed myself,
for your stupid faults,
Even now,
I continue to have second thoughts,

The pain you put me through,
will never leave,
You've scarred me for life,
thanks, for giving me more strife,

Do you remember,
what you did?
Do you remember,
that one little fib?

You said it was a game,
A good little thing,
And in my innocence,
I believed,

It's over now,
And I do believe,
forgiveness is in order,
between you and me.
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Comments: 11

Od-69one [2006-12-15 18:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful,

Beautiful

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6strings4Him In reply to Od-69one [2006-12-16 22:28:07 +0000 UTC]

aww thank you@!!!!

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firefightergurl [2006-12-15 17:13:22 +0000 UTC]

your welcome

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firefightergurl [2006-12-14 22:28:57 +0000 UTC]

I know exactly where you are coming from this poem is beautifully written

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6strings4Him In reply to firefightergurl [2006-12-15 15:53:30 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

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BrokenWeirdo [2006-10-19 18:20:00 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful. yet sad.

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6strings4Him In reply to BrokenWeirdo [2006-10-20 11:43:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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mindshards [2006-10-11 15:56:10 +0000 UTC]

This is crazy, that could have been written for someone I know if you changed the three to six. Pretty good. There's a couple spots where beat of it gets off a little bit, but besides that it's good. But I'm really one to talk-when i try to do patterns and rhyme schemes it usually goes to hell...

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6strings4Him In reply to mindshards [2006-10-11 16:38:21 +0000 UTC]

ya... well i was actually like 6-8 when all of that happened but you see... 3 rhymes... lol. I am a goob.

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mindshards In reply to 6strings4Him [2006-10-11 18:03:48 +0000 UTC]

Three because it rhymed. You are a goob. Which is interesting for me to say, because I never use that word.

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6strings4Him In reply to mindshards [2006-10-12 11:48:44 +0000 UTC]

lol. Ya i am pretty weird.

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