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6strings4Him — What I needed.
Published: 2006-11-06 17:41:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 183; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Cut my flesh,
So I'll bleed.
Stab my heart,
It I don't need.
Slit my throat,
The demon will feed.
Burn my skin,
So i can feel.
Peirce my eyes,
So i know your real.
Pull out my hair,
So vanity will flee.
This isn't what you wanted,
But this is me.
I'm everything you don't need,
But blood forever,
Binds us together.
Rip out my throat,
Claw my eyes,
Tear off my face,
Maybe then I'll die.
Crimson blood will fall like rain,
And in the flood,
You'll go insane.
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Comments: 6

little-drummer-girl3 [2006-11-10 17:06:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, pretty heavy. I have a friend who write stuff similar to that.

It's an awesome piece. Extremely dark and emotional. Very well written.

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6strings4Him In reply to little-drummer-girl3 [2006-11-13 15:57:32 +0000 UTC]

thank you soo much!! i appreciate it like you wouldn't believe!

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little-drummer-girl3 In reply to 6strings4Him [2006-11-13 18:20:37 +0000 UTC]

No problem, little dude. Do you write much poetry?

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6strings4Him In reply to little-drummer-girl3 [2006-11-13 19:02:11 +0000 UTC]

not really... I use to but not so much anymore. i have another in my gallery but i think you already read it.

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BrokenWeirdo [2006-11-07 21:41:25 +0000 UTC]

It seems violent.
I'm lost, and don't know what to think.
It seems nice, but it doesn't effect me.

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6strings4Him In reply to BrokenWeirdo [2006-11-08 12:59:30 +0000 UTC]

ya i understand. I won't effect most and that's fine. lol

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