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Published: 2004-06-01 15:08:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 144; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 13
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damn, babe..ever since you left, i can't think straight. you're always on my mind.
you've taken the best of me, and now what they see is all i have left.
ever since you've gone, i feel so lost and confused, and now i find
myself waking up to lonely days, ending in cold empty nights, except
whenever you call or i call, and we talk on the phone for hours
or until my card runs out, and we pretend that we're only a kiss away.
being apart is the hardest thing ever, and everytime i screw up, i cower
in fear that you've had enough of my flaws. but together we stay,
no matter what happens, because every couple has their ups and downs,
and if theirs is true, they make it through hard times, just like you and i.
someone so trusting, forgiving, loving, and beautiful; im so blessed to have found
someone like you. and i thank God each sleepless night that passes by
for everyday i've spent with you. one night, the time was right, and i made a solemn vow
to love you forever unconditionally, as i have before, as i do now.
Comments: 6
i like it..
I'm not usually a fan of poetry thats...I dunno how to put it, clumped? together like this..letter style, but this one is an exception..
Good job, and I wish you and your (apparently) loved one the best <3
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much thanks. that poem was written a long time ago, and surprisingly... it still hold true. might i ask, how did you stumble upon my poem? i haven't really been an "active" artist..
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you favorited one of my poems
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i bunched it cuz i didnt look right separating each quatrain and the couplet.. it was more like a letter or something cut mid-sentences just so they could rhyme.. *shrug*
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