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Published: 2011-12-09 22:12:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 4
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The drips from my soaking facelanding on the metal heating grate.
(I write what I know.
And right now
That's all I hear:
the gentle empty pinging)
And I know
that words plucked from restless air
and slapped together in scrambled lines
are not poetry.
But still I write them.
I jot them down in the wee hours
in bed by the light of a crooked warm lamp,
on flimsy notebook paper better suited to equations than verses.
Still expecting the contents of my mind
so carelessly plotted in pencil
to somehow resemble
poetry.
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Comments: 9
Abracadabrante In reply to Hypersonic53 [2011-12-18 23:17:37 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you!
And thank you for the fave.
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Hypersonic53 In reply to Abracadabrante [2011-12-19 12:31:50 +0000 UTC]
No problem!
And no problem!
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TheRavensNest17 [2011-12-11 02:10:26 +0000 UTC]
This sits very warmly in my heart. Beautiful, simply beautiful.
As an added note, in lieu of your comment on my quotes, you just earned yourself a spot there too. Go check it out.
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Abracadabrante In reply to TheRavensNest17 [2011-12-11 02:18:56 +0000 UTC]
I'm so glad you enjoy it!
And wow... I'm honoured. Thank you!
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TheRavensNest17 In reply to Abracadabrante [2011-12-12 00:18:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, dear.
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Darkfyyre [2011-12-10 14:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous, absolutely beautiful. I love the visual you've created, and I can definitely feel like I can relate. Great job!
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Abracadabrante In reply to Darkfyyre [2011-12-10 17:39:07 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
And thanks for the fave as well, it means a lot.
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Darkfyyre In reply to Abracadabrante [2011-12-11 00:14:48 +0000 UTC]
No problem at all; I really do like your writing.
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