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Abracadabrante β€” Perseids
Published: 2012-01-30 18:22:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 401; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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Description Row of six,
twelve eyes searching.
Logs,
stones and wind-whipped trees,
water:
they are nothing.

Underneath a fragile blanket
there are legs and arms,
laughter and warmth and whispers
and frigid fingertips.

An exclamation.

A shining line
etched across
what seems like foreverβ€”
2.54 inches in the sky.

A gasp, a sigh.
Destruction is glorious.

And watching again.
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Comments: 5

BeyondJen [2013-08-14 00:02:57 +0000 UTC]

I love how the brief statements echo the meteors streaks. Really very nicely done.

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LadyofGaerdon [2012-02-02 01:21:24 +0000 UTC]

Ooh I can picture this perfectly! I love meteor showers...

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Abracadabrante In reply to LadyofGaerdon [2012-02-06 23:10:24 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thank you!
I know, I love meteor showers as well. Shooting stars always seem so mythical, but then you see a meteor shower and learn they actually exist.

And thanks for the llama as well!

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DamagedHomewrecker [2012-02-01 00:04:19 +0000 UTC]

i really like how this sounds. ive read it several times now. and it just has a lovely sound.

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Abracadabrante In reply to DamagedHomewrecker [2012-02-06 23:13:00 +0000 UTC]

Why thank you! It's nice to hear that it has a good sounds, as I often worry about that.

And thanks for the fave as well.

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