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Published: 2017-08-12 20:37:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 2458; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 0
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The alcohol on my lips
Pales when compared to the intoxicating
Sound of your voice that lingers in my ears, the way you say my name...oh my God — the way you say my name...
You make my head spin.
Vertigo.
I stumble to the ground,
Limbs weak, unsteady,
The fluttering in my stomach
From anxious butterflies caused by you.
Rasgueado.
The strumming of my heart strings,
A rhythm they seek to find, echoing your name.
Open up yourself to me, I want to sip you
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Intoxicate me.
With your words, your mind, your soul
Enslave me.
Bring me under your influence.
Intoxicate. Me.
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Comments: 14
Sultry and luscious, leaving a delicious aftertaste of sweet romance and burning passion. <3
LadyLincoln pointed out the moment I was drawn in completely - The timing for that line is perfect, anywhere else in this piece would have changed the whole mood, taking away my above sentiments and changing the outcome, I believe.
xx Dae
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Wow, Dae. Thank you very much for your appreciation of this poem!
I'm really happy to know the impact it has and that the reader can feel that romance and burning passion! Thank you to both you and LadyLincoln .
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stop writing about me... you know it just cant be, we just cant be..
Always, i mean never yours,
sasquatch
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XD
Well, at least I can say I tried!!! 
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Indeed it is!
Thank you for your comment.
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You had me at: "the way you say my name."
Beautiful, sultry little piece, darling one. I enjoyed how you formatted it, too.
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Wow!!
Thank you. I'm always appreciative of your feedback and positivity!
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You're welcome, dearheart. As always, you honor me beyond measure with your sweetness.
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Thank you!
Your presence is good too...
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