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AddictiveSimplicity — Hey, Baby.
Published: 2007-06-30 05:16:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 81; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description hold up your head darling
they want to see your pretty face
as the life escapes you
you fall
while we put all these holes
through your paperthin skin
a split-second of resistance
then the needles slide through
to create thrashed memories
of a whole
now a hole
punched through you
darling hold your head up
how many times must I remind you?
those hypnotic green eyes need to say goodbye
before the poison escapes the syringe
and embraces you
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Comments: 7

Czarewich [2007-08-13 04:33:18 +0000 UTC]

I love the use of both words "whole" and "hole", it creates an interesting juxtaposition of both halves of the poem. Also, great imagery.

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to Czarewich [2007-08-13 08:41:24 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading!! Much

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Deadly-Secret [2007-06-30 18:42:56 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Eerily cool.

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to Deadly-Secret [2007-07-01 04:46:30 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-06-30 05:22:09 +0000 UTC]

dear Abbie:

must you be so amazingly talented?

aka

love it.

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AddictiveSimplicity In reply to EmbersOfAnAlibi [2007-06-30 05:24:01 +0000 UTC]

WHOSE GOT THE CRACK?

Teehee thanks dear.

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EmbersOfAnAlibi In reply to AddictiveSimplicity [2007-07-01 02:03:43 +0000 UTC]

good times man.

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