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Published: 2017-04-04 07:08:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 6069; Favourites: 246; Downloads: 0
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More fanart huhu I probably should be doing other stuff but I can't help it. Please forgive me, people I owe trades to. I'll get around to doing it.Osoro is one of my favorite rivals and so much better than senpai, let's admit it
Luckily, he actually turned out looking better than I expected it to be, I mean at least less bishie than usual.
I am so sorry, the animation is in slow motion. It's not supposed to be that slow huhu.Β
" Any comments, suggestions or feedback is much appreciated!"
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That rain drop is awesome, actually I love the single moving abject with the still life backdrop
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Aww ahu thank you so much!! <3 You are always so kind, my this is very old xD it's been so long since I've drawn this
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Oh don't throw them away they're so pretty!
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Aww huh thanks <3 Hmm I'll think about it xD but really, thanksΒ
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I just noticed that you animated it.Β
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lol, it's a pretty small animation so it's understandable
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uh.... how do i say this but .... i got inspration from this art and draw my otp (hehe)
and i wanna show you but i am scared .....
mybe you will angry at me but hehe....
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Aww don't be scared, I'm actually really interested to see it and if you want I can give feedback too ! 
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Hello! I'm here from Project Comment c:
This is a really great piece (I'm a fan of Yan. Sim. myself). I'd say you got the characters almost completely spot on; I feel like Osoro would be just a bit bulkier, especially in the torso/shoulder areas. It's a bit weird to see Ayano with her hair down? Loses a bit of the recognition factor. In the future, I'd recommend going with the ponytail, but hey I could still tell who it was.
The clothing should have a bit more wrinkles, like around where the arm attaches to the torso, and wherever the clothing would fall the most loosely. I can't tell if they are standing directly in the rain, but if their clothes are wet, then there should be a lot more wrinkles because clothing tends to cling to the body when damp.
The background is wonderful; it gives a feeling of depth and provides detail without taking too much away from the characters up front. I particularly like the flowers (the sunflower by Osoro is my favorite). The colors that you've used here are also very nice; they compliment each other! It's a wide range of colors without looking too all-over-the-place, and it's not jarring at all.
Someone else has already said some stuff about the raindrop, so I'll go past that.
The character's expressions could be a bit more expressive; you could achieve this by exaggerating their feelings a bit more. Move the eyebrows down a little bit, maybe make them squint a little bit (lower eyelid could move up?). The mouths are good!
All in all this is a wonderful piece and I'm excited to see what you do next!! c:
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Ohh I see! Well I can admit I was having a pretty hard time with the proportions and all that but whenever I did try to fix it, it seemed imbalanced but I'll keep practicing and hopefully I'll be able to get it right next time! As for the expressions, I'll give that a try! I'm still working on how to place eyebrows and squints to get the effect I want.Β
Thank you for the comment and critique!
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No problem! I'm excited to see what you come up with next.
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Shidesu: "Bloody rain..."
Aishi: "I can go and buy and umbrella."
Shidesu: "No!...You need to stay warm."
I do have one complaint. Yandere-chan looks more like Oka.
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I thought so too.
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Oops. Hmmm... what could I do next time to make it look more like Aishi tho?
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Well, it depends. What I would do is make Ayano have her signature bangs hanging off the side of her head under the hoodie and have her hair tucked toward the back to where her ponytail is.
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Ohh okay I see. Thank you!
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Well, someone just earned a watch. :3
...that's a subtle way of saying that your art is awesome xD
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OMG THAT'S SO NICE OF YOU TO SAY HUHU THANK YOU!
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No problem! You deserve it! :3
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Something seems off with the raindrop coming down...falls too slowly
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I know. Its supposed to be faster but whenever I open it, it's much slower. I tried to fix it but nothing happened even wth the frames at no delay. The image might be too big i think.
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Hah! I did recognize this 
Hmmm so I found this in Project Comment so I guess I need to start criticizing now.Β
There is nothing 'wrong' with your picture! It all looks very lovely together. Now something I can find i I look closely is Osoro's proportions. I think Osoro is a pretty tall guy so his elbows are probably a little too high for his frame. (at least Osoro projects height and menace!) It makes him look shorter than he is. As a personal choice, I would enjoy it if Osoro's coat was a bit more detailed, because it kind of looks a little like a blanket
I personally like this piece, and look forward to seeing what you do in the future! Keep up the good work!
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Aw thank you so much and I'm so glad you recognized it haha.
Ohh okay, thank you for the critique! I'll try be more uniform next time haha.
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This is amazing! I adore the soft colouring you added in to give a light-hearted touch to it. The characters emotions further add the mode to this piece with their well-defined expressions. One of my favorite thing about this is the drop pf rain signifying the weather.
Keep up the good work, I'd love to see more like this! But I suggest one thing to make it better, next time you can animate all the rain drops to give a more lively effect to it
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Thank you! I was planning on doing that, but I had no idea how I could but I'll look into it. Thank you again!
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No problem ^_^ Just a suggestion :3Β
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Aah your style is so nice to look at ;w;
It gives off that watercolor look a bit and it's very soft and beautiful here >W<
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Aww thank you so much! I'm glad I could pull that off, I was experimenting with Paint Tool Sai haha
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