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Published: 2010-01-11 01:36:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 82; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Now when I first met you I did'nt know what to thinkFor some reason you just seemed different
I layed in the grass and waited for the hours to pass
As usual time just came and went
I don't know what made me go outside that day
But I'm sure glad that I did
Cause I met this girl
And I'd do anything for this kid
She's wise and sweet
Yet civil and strong
Her patience is deep
And she makes me belong
In a world so divided by who you are
You've managed to shine just like a star
Stay true to yourself, your hopes, your dreams
Ignore what people say, It doesn't mean a thing
Cause without a doubt
You're pretty on the inside and out
I hope you take this to heart
You mean a lot to me
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Comments: 9
Gorelus [2010-01-12 17:04:04 +0000 UTC]
Very beautiful poem which centers around a great concept. You should show it to her if you haven't already.
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aemoant In reply to Gorelus [2010-01-13 16:02:01 +0000 UTC]
(: yup I showed it to her.... She said it made her cry hehe.... thank you sooo much for the comment.
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AnubisNova [2010-01-11 19:39:46 +0000 UTC]
Did you show this to her? It really is a nice piece.
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aemoant In reply to AnubisNova [2010-01-13 16:03:41 +0000 UTC]
yes i did... she said that it made her cry hehe ... thank you so muchhh
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