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Published: 2013-08-07 20:14:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 439; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Finding timeStill within a summer night
So softly rests the hand of time
Beyond the reach of city light
The wind still plays an ancient rhyme.
Within the clearing falls the moon
Across the heavens ride the stars
The end of night will come too soon
But for now the time is ours
A moment for the dreamer
To spin the web of dreams
A moment for the lover
To learn what romance means
Time to be a mystic
Time to be a child
To put away the masks of life
And revel in the wild
Pick out a star to steer by
A guiding silver light
And rest a weary spirit
Within this summer night.
Comments: 10
Blurrygrey [2013-10-18 02:32:43 +0000 UTC]
It's true that the night doesn't last long, but for as long as it is, it's my time.
It's usually at night time that I'm most comfortable working on my work, too.
The 3rd set of phrases about the moments are my most favorite in the poem. After reading them, I felt that feeling that says, "Dood, yea, that is so true and I love that!"
This poem's really good.
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PixlPhantasy [2013-08-09 03:04:00 +0000 UTC]
Very sweet and great message. Even the simplest of things can be important. ^^
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Aetherwolf76 In reply to PixlPhantasy [2013-08-09 03:12:44 +0000 UTC]
Very often the simple things are the strongest. And so often they are overlooked.
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PixlPhantasy In reply to Aetherwolf76 [2013-08-09 03:15:20 +0000 UTC]
Very much so. People are so rushed now they just don't stop to smell the roses so to speak.
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AngelicEmpyress [2013-08-08 12:37:06 +0000 UTC]
wow, this is really wonderful work
you are such a great poet...
this one is very sweet and soothing to me, beautifully done
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Aetherwolf76 In reply to AngelicEmpyress [2013-08-08 20:43:05 +0000 UTC]
thank you my muse was asleep for a while she wakes up at the strangest times.
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AngelicEmpyress In reply to Aetherwolf76 [2013-08-09 00:35:37 +0000 UTC]
d'awwww you are still awesome
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DoubtfullyVicious In reply to Aetherwolf76 [2013-08-09 11:31:55 +0000 UTC]
no problem sugar.
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