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Aetherwolf76 — Summer sun
Published: 2011-03-12 20:48:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 258; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Summer sunGentle beams of summer sun fall golden from the sky
Warming hearts and air and earth and creatures such as I
Gentle rays and gentle dreams run through a sleepy mind
Let there always be summer sun to slow the hands of time.
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I love the last line "to slow the hands of time". I think it has a beautiful ending that really leaves and impression on the reader and it really makes you think.
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Thank you 
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Reminds me of that old Paul Oakenfold track, Southern Sun, especially the "hands of time" bit. It's not the same, but it reminds me of that.
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never heard that one i'll have to find it
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what's the first part of the poem you come up with?
e.g.: title, particular line, rhyme scheme, concept, etc.
just curious
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Hard question actually because it's not the same every time. This one started with remembering the summer sun
hmmm I guess usually my poems start with a spark. an idea that turns itself into words in my mind.
or a single line that brings an idea into focus. Something that takes me somewhere and shows me a scene
and says write about this.
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