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Published: 2010-07-18 10:46:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 254; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description I remember being drowned by my own current, swimming backward in the stead of forwards. Sinking steadily in the dark gloom. I recall attempting to scream for help as my lungs filled with water. I choked and spluttered until, a beautiful twang fell on my once deaf ears. An ethereal hum eased through the gloom around me. Music. A heart- thumping tattoo vibrated throughout the murk. Music. An old friend took my hand and guided me on. I'll admit the waves were rough, the current strong. My strokes faltered, I was sucked backward a few times, but, eventually, the waters shallowed , the sun eased from behind the clouds, and to my surprise there were others. They were dragging themselves out of the crashing waves, stumbling. They made their ways to the shore. When they arrived, people awaited them. The lost were accepted with warm, dry arms by those who loved them. Friends, family. I pulled myself onto the bank was shocked to find anyone there. But there were. The ones who had always meant the most to me were waiting on that beach, arms open. I'd never been more broken, and I'd never felt so whole.
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Comments: 14

protectorwriter [2010-07-21 03:21:24 +0000 UTC]

awe inspiring

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BoiChick [2010-07-18 17:39:10 +0000 UTC]

Very gorgeous~ ^^

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-19 09:46:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Was it my common colorful writing? lol!

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BoiChick In reply to AffinityWriter [2010-07-19 22:46:34 +0000 UTC]

'Welcome~ X3 And I've always thought people tended to write poetry better than prose. Though to merge it~ lol. X3

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-20 01:56:41 +0000 UTC]

It is one of my brighter ideas. And pardon me, but I do believe that is saying something.

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BoiChick In reply to AffinityWriter [2010-07-20 02:03:28 +0000 UTC]

Bwaha.~ nah, I think you've plenty good ideas.

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-20 02:05:50 +0000 UTC]

lolz What shuld I call it? Prosetry? hah. Name IT!

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BoiChick In reply to AffinityWriter [2010-07-20 02:13:59 +0000 UTC]

Hm... I've read books entirely written in poetry. ProsexPoetry. XD

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-20 02:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Lmao, that says 'sex' in it!!!

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BoiChick In reply to AffinityWriter [2010-07-20 02:22:21 +0000 UTC]

Hm? *looks again* I do-- WHAI YES IT DOES. XD Fff, PoetryxProse? Though the sex thing is kinda funny.

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-20 02:28:51 +0000 UTC]

I'd rather it say sex! its freakin hilarious! Poetrose? Chrisery? Chrisms? Jacoetry? lol

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BoiChick In reply to AffinityWriter [2010-07-20 02:45:09 +0000 UTC]

So confusing. XDD

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AffinityWriter In reply to BoiChick [2010-07-20 03:11:23 +0000 UTC]

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xlivexfastx [2010-07-18 10:48:23 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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