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Published: 2004-07-22 01:03:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description The rain beats across the rooftop
Like the impatient old woman
Drumming her nicotine stained fingers
Across the cool glass
Waiting for death
But each drop counts off precious seconds
Crystal moments
For the young girl that lies beneath
She has been infected by love
(Or at least she calls it that)
And is now paralyzed
Searching each new place for a way to get back to him
No matter how far she travels
And I watch her with my feigned wisdom
Start to shake my head
But then catch myself
For I too am afflicted
I too spend each night drinking in the liquid scenes
Of the perfect days we spent together
Before drifting off into sleep that will never be as satisfying
As when he wraps his arms around me
And in that moment
I find that I am not so different
From the bitter old woman
In her empty house
Scorning each moment that passes
And welcoming what is sure to be my demise
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Comments: 6

genuinecrisis [2004-07-29 05:42:40 +0000 UTC]

"Waiting for death
But each drop counts off precious seconds
Crystal moments
For the young girl that lies beneath
She has been infected by love"

I love these lines. Very nice.
-tif

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AfraidToDrown In reply to genuinecrisis [2004-07-29 20:14:57 +0000 UTC]

gracias

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frankienexus [2004-07-22 13:16:42 +0000 UTC]

perfect poetic movie of the senses

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AfraidToDrown In reply to frankienexus [2004-07-22 20:41:36 +0000 UTC]


merci

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dex-the-party-chika [2004-07-22 01:11:10 +0000 UTC]

woooo.....i really love u'r words
some times we need a little bordem for some random insperation to leak in to our minds.....
Great job
-Cristina

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AfraidToDrown In reply to dex-the-party-chika [2004-07-22 02:15:05 +0000 UTC]

why thank ya
in my case it was a lot of boredom but o well..i gave me a good chance to catch up on sleep

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