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AfraidToDrown β€” Like This
Published: 2004-10-19 02:31:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 307; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 1
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Description Its days like this I wish I smoked;
Just for the sake of having a bad habit
And on days like this I wish it were true
That good girls are just bad girls that don’t get caught
But maybe I should just leave my mind spinning
Like the empty bottle in the middle of the room
Because its only days like this
That you like what you see
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Comments: 5

poeticsighs [2005-01-05 20:16:51 +0000 UTC]

sometimes the shorter pieces say much more

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genuinecrisis [2004-10-19 21:25:09 +0000 UTC]

Yea I agree, it leaves the reader thinking, the shortness adds mystery. I love it.
-tif

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AfraidToDrown In reply to genuinecrisis [2004-10-19 23:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! i wasnt sure if i liked it cuz my others r longer..but im glad to hear people liked it..

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inmyroom [2004-10-19 16:14:32 +0000 UTC]

wow, this poem is powerful.. it leaves you thinking afterwards. it's good.. open to interpretation, yet creates its own image..

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AfraidToDrown In reply to inmyroom [2004-10-19 23:24:23 +0000 UTC]

well thank you! im glad it made you think..i love it when that happens!

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