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Published: 2019-09-15 12:57:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 106992; Favourites: 1555; Downloads: 282
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Arjen could use a tan, and Ariel likes showing him off to the world ocassionally, potentially awaken some dormant fetishes.It's kind of annoying though, he's not even fat enough to serve as a head pillow, she's gotta work on that.
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I feel bad for arjen heβll probably have a hard time getting back up
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Typo big time lol π
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Wow this looks great !
The only real criticism I have is about the left leg of the fatty. her thigh seems a bit flat compared to her right leg (maybe flat isn't the correct term for her huge legs e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="
I'm not sure if this is due to the shading or the drawing though.
Still great, I love contrast !
Oh I have to reach 100 words, so here is some minor criticisms :
- The left foot of the fatty should spread a bit outward
- The extra rolls on the left arm of the fatty looks a bit like extra articulations, this feeling is reinforced by the shadow of the book. but that is rather more a matter of personal taste.
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Thanks, I appreciate the criticism, I can see where it's coming from
Also, the fatty is a guy, otherwise they would be publicly indecent.
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Oh sorry, didn't notice.
Then I add an other criticism :
This guy has pretty long and confusing eyelashes Β
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She can't sit up right like she does now and rest her head against him. Clearly he needs to be fatter.
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She'll gladly roll him over when the time comes. Preferably make a save the whales joke while she's at it.
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This is what we've been waiting for.
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The y are a lovely couple do more picture of them
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"He's not even fat enough to serve as a head pillow, she's gotta work on that." I see Ariel is a woman of fine taste!
Great work here! The background blends really well with the lovely couple. Also, is that a love bite on the side of Arjen's belly?
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It's just some lipstick. First thing she does each day after putting on her make-up is kissing that tummy and leaving a mark for the day.
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I actually thought that was a third nipple
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r/cursedcomments
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How is that a cursed comment? I thought it was a third nipple to take a stab societal norms for beauty
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Out of context, the comment could be seem as surreal or bizarre. Put into a different context it could be seemed as odd or "cursed"
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Thank you! They are a lot of fun!
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