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AlfredoLover — Melancholy Roses
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Published: 2011-08-06 02:45:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 613; Favourites: 9; Downloads: 0
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MelancholyHow a single touch
Can reap souls
As the Melody
Begins to subside
Watching Mind & Body divide
The agony, accustomed to my eyes
Wishing to become happy again
As I turned into an empty shell
Treating the living dead
Is a waste of medicine
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Comments: 28
It sounds like it would be in a metal song. Each note is shredded and growled to loudly that it doesn't have to rhyme and you don't even really understand, but you just... feel it.
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Thanks I guess. XD
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Sadness can't just kill, my darling.
It can also create.
Very beautiful, by the by.
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So very true. and thank you. I appreciate it
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You never really comment on my work. lol,or not that often though >.>
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you must have some rough time to write like this..or you at least feel pity for someone..you're good, very good that is
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Thank you. It would seem like that, but nothing really happened. I wrote this in like half an hour. I enjoy experimenting when i write poetry. XD
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yeah, I also write some good stuff in a really short time lol 
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Awww... its so sad yet its so beautiful in a dark kinda way.
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Thank you, I was always a fan of gothic literature. But I'm not so sure im good at writing it though XD
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Trust me when I say you have a knack for it. It was really moving.
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I'll take your word for it. I appreciate the compliment. Thank you.
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no problem
LOL! I just remembered I've had about four to five cups of soda and I'm hyper!!
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lol, you remind me of one of my friends. But then again. She only gets hyper off just one can XD
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Lol well keep up the good work and if you get a chance please look at my work.
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I would love to, and will be doing just that in a few minutes
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i wud say i like it but...idk what melancholy means :/
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Get a dictionary lol. Words to a poet is like, A rifle to a soldier. You'll get killed without it. Not like you will die though, I just have strange metaphors. XD
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"Noun: A deep, pensive, and long-lasting sadness.
Adjective: Sad, gloomy, or depressed."
in other words it's kind of the opposite of happy
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