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AliceDaRabbit — .:LOTP:. Chapter 5 Date Night
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This Chapter was added cause I felt it was needed. I kinda originally skipped over Orlan's and Shaila's romance when they were younger. So I fixed it. But that said this chapter was SO HARD TO WRITE. I fear it comes off... poor. But alas here we go!
*~~When Critiquing!~~*
If you're going to Critique, I ask very nicely for constructive criticism! Grammar, spelling, Anything like that is helpful when you point it out! I sometimes miss these things! So thank you! Writing is NOT my strong point. If anything does not make sense, let me know! I can explain and maybe edit the story if something is confusing. I am after all, a comic artist. I am more used to drawing details not explaining them.
Personal Critiques about this chapter:
FLUFFY CHAPTER IS FLUFFY that is all.
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