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AliceDaRabbit — .:LotP:. Chapter 16 Fish n Puke
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Oh, oh no. The Doc is here.
*~~When Critiquing!~~*
If you're going to Critique, I ask very nicely for constructive criticism! Grammar, spelling, Anything like that is helpful when you point it out! I sometimes miss these things! So thank you! Writing is NOT my strong point. If anything does not make sense, let me know! I can explain and maybe edit the story if something is confusing. I am after all, a comic artist. I am more used to drawing details not explaining them.
Personal Critiques about this chapter:
I should have mashed this chapter with the next one but I forgot and it's a nightmare to do it now xD
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