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And here folks is where it all goes down hill. I don't have much to say about this one other then it took me way too long to get this chapter done lol Also hello Gafar! Everyone is NOT pleased to meet you.
*~~When Critiquing!~~*
If you're going to Critique, I ask very nicely for constructive criticism! Grammar, spelling, Anything like that is helpful when you point it out! I sometimes miss these things! So thank you! Writing is NOT my strong point. If anything does not make sense, let me know! I can explain and maybe edit the story if something is confusing. I am after all, a comic artist. I am more used to drawing details not explaining them.
Personal Critiques about this chapter:
Meh ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
I do try not to swear too much in my stuff, but this chapter I left alone for the most part...
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