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Published: 2011-07-25 18:12:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 2
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Description Hadn't
You
Learned
By
Now?

Oh really
It was
That easy
Ignoring me
Blushing idiotically

Nope not me
Not this time
Not this night
Not right now
Not ever again

Go on you fool
Run from me now
Back to your mother
Pride shattered in pieces
Bruises inking your skin

Hope you've learned your lesson
Or better yet our discussion
Violence is never the key
It never leads anywhere productive
So why do we fight?
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Comments: 7

Aliuh [2011-07-31 20:55:15 +0000 UTC]

I really like it! I think its interesting the way you had a set number of words per paragraph.

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to Aliuh [2011-08-02 22:00:18 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! It didn't start out that way. xD I just finished it, then looked back. I started laughing and realized what I had done.

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Aliuh In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-08-04 02:01:04 +0000 UTC]

I love it when that happens. XD

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to Aliuh [2011-08-04 21:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Me too!

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eternalwriterstar [2011-07-25 20:42:14 +0000 UTC]

Wow I like it

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to eternalwriterstar [2011-07-26 00:09:25 +0000 UTC]

xD Wow, thank you.

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eternalwriterstar In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-26 00:30:18 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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