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Published: 2011-07-21 20:28:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 4
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Description Those soulless pits
The very same that stares
No emotion
No expression
Where's the facial animation?
All that character?

It's somewhat sad, really
No longer does it smile
Feel sorrow or happiness
The motive of life
Or pull of ambition
Always staring into oblivion
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Comments: 13

starrkat [2012-02-26 05:10:25 +0000 UTC]

Nice poem!

Oh, wow, your story is kind of creepy o.o
Maybe your mom/dad thought you were old enough to not have dolls anymore so they staged it to look like your doll escaped? I have no idea xD

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to starrkat [2012-02-27 01:35:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I'm glad you like it.

Whoa, that would be an exllecent theory. I hope that's what happened. xD

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CoffeeCupPup [2011-08-28 17:34:51 +0000 UTC]

Okay that's really quite well written! Doll eyes...@_@
I've never had a doll with buttons for eyes...I wasn't really a doll kid..but the ones I did have were either barbies or dolls with embroidered eyes.
The story about your doll..that's really kinda creepy o__O;; My initial thought was "omg she escaped out the window because a fairy came and gave her real eyes and so she left her button eyes and then she jumped out omg" XD It made me think of the Velveteen Rabbit.

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to CoffeeCupPup [2011-09-01 22:27:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Mesko.

Wow. That's quite an theory. She never really scared me until that moment...o.O;

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CoffeeCupPup In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-09-05 20:40:37 +0000 UTC]

XD You're welcome!

Hahahaha sorry D:
My brain makes strange connections...XD

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amber-dono [2011-07-22 02:53:55 +0000 UTC]

That's great!

In the end you'll always beat me as a writer.

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to amber-dono [2011-07-22 04:44:19 +0000 UTC]

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eternalwriterstar [2011-07-21 21:36:19 +0000 UTC]

I like it

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to eternalwriterstar [2011-07-22 00:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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eternalwriterstar In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-22 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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AzeeraTheNinja [2011-07-21 21:30:16 +0000 UTC]

I loved the first stanza!
And the second one I liked too, I just liked the first one more

Only thing is in the last line "starring" should be "staring", but besides that I think its great!

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to AzeeraTheNinja [2011-07-22 00:38:35 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I agree with you. XD

Darn, thanks. That's going to kill me.

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AzeeraTheNinja In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-22 00:44:33 +0000 UTC]



You're welcome

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