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AlienLifeDetected — Cheated
Published: 2011-07-10 23:01:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 138; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description Soft and tender
Joyous and sweet
You took this
All from me

I feel betrayed
Alone at night
My faith crushed
How could you?

I am surrounded
Friends and family
No one understanding
All this pain

One day you
And everyone else
Shall regret this
I claim revenge
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Comments: 10

Eli-Quinn-joe [2011-07-11 01:55:37 +0000 UTC]

LOL, this is so contradicting, but it's very well written though XD

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to Eli-Quinn-joe [2011-07-11 17:49:22 +0000 UTC]

I actually wrote the poem first, then looked over at your drawing and thought it fit. Idk, I suppose it didn't but I'm glad your liked it. :3

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Eli-Quinn-joe In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-15 20:20:09 +0000 UTC]

It's OK. It's just that, my version of the moral of the picture is ....nothing. I've got no clue what the heck I drew or why I even bothered to draw this. So, LMAO XD

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to Eli-Quinn-joe [2011-07-15 22:23:11 +0000 UTC]

It's okay if the poem as nothing to do with it, Eli. You don't have to use it. Sometimes what the artist creates is better than another.

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Eli-Quinn-joe In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-16 18:10:02 +0000 UTC]

BUT THE POEM WAS GREAT THOUGH. So I used it anyways ;D

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to Eli-Quinn-joe [2011-07-16 23:12:32 +0000 UTC]

I don't think so. But thanks for trying. And thank you.

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Eli-Quinn-joe In reply to Eli-Quinn-joe [2011-07-11 03:28:20 +0000 UTC]

Reposting this

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eternalwriterstar [2011-07-10 23:04:41 +0000 UTC]

the written part is good and the pic is also good.

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AlienLifeDetected In reply to eternalwriterstar [2011-07-10 23:08:13 +0000 UTC]

Thank you and I'll tell my friend

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eternalwriterstar In reply to AlienLifeDetected [2011-07-10 23:10:03 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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