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Published: 2019-08-13 15:32:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 415; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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Description Woo! Haven't done a huge scene like this in a while! This is based off an idea from an rp me and my boyfriend do together, Luka (the dragon) is challenging her husband, Naka to a fight during a solar eclipse.Ā 

Luka's dragon form design was adopted from (thank you so much for letting me buy this design, Luka is my baby and I love her so much! ;w; )
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Hitsku [2019-08-13 16:23:32 +0000 UTC]

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Alright, for starters I really love the color using of this piece.

Now to the actual critique-

I'm not sure what the character is standing on, grass? And is it a bush behind the character? The perspective seems weird on the bushes compared to the character.

There are a few spots where the shadows don't really make sense, taking from where the light should be coming from.
For example the hair, the shadows are on the side where it's supposed to be light, same thing with the bottom of the tail.

The "platform" that the character is standing on, is too straight. It should be more round so it could look a bit more.. right.
The wings are also placed in a weird place, they're like under the characters arms? Wings are usually placed on the upper back.

I bet if I looked more I could get more words in but that's it for now e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Hope it was helpful!

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Daroity [2019-08-15 13:21:56 +0000 UTC]

I am super glad that you using her and show me the result in an wonderfull drawng!
I love it when I see that the designs where used, and love it way more when they got used in rp, they get much more story and it shows the character love! Ā 

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AlluringDraws In reply to Daroity [2019-08-15 21:27:32 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! I'm so glad you like it! Luka has become one of my absolute favorite characters to rp with and me and my boyfriend basically created an entire world between her and his character, Naka, I'll save you from explaining it all since it's quite the long story but just know that I'm incredibly grateful for having Luka's dragon form's design come from you, I've made a lot of memories with her thus far and I hope to make tons more with her ;w;

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