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Published: 2011-04-14 02:43:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 2595; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 19
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I originally was not going to upload this, but I realized I shouldn't ever have to be embarrassed with anything that I draw, and I feel that this shows at least a little bit of improvement.That, and her counterpart, Fick, got one. Insiminy's just a lot less conservative.
As always, helpful criticism is welcome and appreciated.
Insiminy (c): =allzquiet
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Don't want to sound dumb or anything, but isn't Insiminy a character in Kingdom Hearts?
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No, she's my original character created for a Kingdom Hearts fan game/story what have you. I hope that clears it up!
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Wow, nicely done. I dare not try to draw like that, though it is tempting to see if I can or cannot draw sexy pin ups or swim suits. Points for trying~
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Aww, I think you should try it at least once, you know? If it turns out well then that's great, but if not it'll at least be fun trying, hm?
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You're getting a whole lot better. ^__^ She has nice curves.
Here's my constructive criticism: Be mindful that the human body is typically eight heads tall from head to toe. Four heads to the waist, two heads for a thigh and two heads for the shins. A foot is a little small than a head. Also, while on the subject of proportions, the face is five eyes wide(about) and eight(?) tall when the eyes are tear duct to outer corner.
You're cheating putting her hands behind her head (*playful glare*) but it fits the piece. For her under arms, give it a bit more of an inward curve from her breasts. Maybe a tad higher?
Also, I only just realized/learned the recently. With the foot that has the weight on it, in portraits where the subject is moving forward or in a pose like this, the hip in accordance with the weight bearing foot will be higher than the leg without the body's weight. So, say Insimity is walking in this picture, her left foot, the one hidden behind the one showing, is most likely the weight bearing foot. Her left hip would be higher up that her right hip. So, just keep that in mind. Ha. Nice little tid-bit, I hope.
Hope my "criticism" was helpful. ^____^
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Aaaaaah omigod, I completely overlooked the issue of her weight resting all on one leg >.< I can't believe I did that...it makes complete sense though, now that I look at it. I did also make the torso/legs proportion mistake without realizing it. Grah, it's like you get so caught up in what you're doing right that you completely overlook what you're doing wrong.
I have to thank you for taking the time to write such a long and detailed crit, Rose. It really does mean a lot to me.
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Hahaha, don't stress too much about it. ^^ I often make mistakes as well, and definitely of that type too. But I guess it's something for the memory bank. Hah.
You're welcome. It was my pleasure. ^__^
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Gah, sorry! DX I got all caught up in my advice that I misspelled her name. Insiminy. Pardon my mistake. ^^"
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