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AltaredFox — Stand Up
Published: 2012-08-24 03:03:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 9
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Description I'm tired of this drama
I'm tired of this crap
I'm tired of the whining
I'm tired of it all

Everyone is tired
Its the main word around
Everyone wants a break
From being tired of being tired

There's no need for this shit
There's no need for hate
We need to all get along
And get over our petty ways

We need to stop being hypocrites
And start taking our own advice
We need to finally listen
And finally stand up

Stop being tired all the time
Stop complaining all the time
Enjoy the time you have
You don't know how lucky you are

These words come from everyone
But we need to finally act on them
Stand up for what you believe
Even if you're the only one
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Comments: 26

Haikumato [2013-05-27 12:35:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank God SOMEONE finally understands!! Great poem, speaks the truth.

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AltaredFox In reply to Haikumato [2013-05-27 14:42:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I've been thinking this for ages and it just finally came out in a good poem

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Haikumato In reply to AltaredFox [2013-05-27 16:07:25 +0000 UTC]

Not a problem.

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Mikara95 [2012-08-25 01:22:15 +0000 UTC]

This is purely brilliant, reading outloud in a few senses it seems like it could be considered Slam poetry in a few areas, and it does hold the properties of it, it's also fairly true. Your getting really really good with your words

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AltaredFox In reply to Mikara95 [2012-08-25 01:49:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm not sure what Slam poetry is though, if you could tell me

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Mikara95 In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-25 04:21:05 +0000 UTC]

Well slam Poetry is poetry done well, Loud and Proud, it's usually set to music that defines it and done in a loud or soft voice, but it's always meant to be done with a high degree of passion

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AltaredFox In reply to Mikara95 [2012-08-25 15:13:17 +0000 UTC]

Ah alright, I guess like what my school does when we have a poetry slam, everyone shares poems like that

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arrowgirl26 [2012-08-24 22:28:49 +0000 UTC]

I REALLY love this!! <3
believe every word said!! and i agree with u 100%

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AltaredFox In reply to arrowgirl26 [2012-08-24 22:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks so much!!!

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arrowgirl26 In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-25 22:52:59 +0000 UTC]

this is really good

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AltaredFox In reply to arrowgirl26 [2012-08-26 00:23:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^

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Clonesniper [2012-08-24 19:29:00 +0000 UTC]

WOAH!

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AltaredFox In reply to Clonesniper [2012-08-24 22:15:16 +0000 UTC]

Haha thanks?

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Clonesniper In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-25 21:06:55 +0000 UTC]

Err.......It's really good ^.^

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ElectricBlue91 [2012-08-24 03:14:00 +0000 UTC]

This is like, wow, somewhat related to me. How I feed up with everything.

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AltaredFox In reply to ElectricBlue91 [2012-08-24 03:21:30 +0000 UTC]

Good! I want it to relate to everyone!

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ElectricBlue91 In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-24 06:14:56 +0000 UTC]

That's all I need to hear. Someone to relate who has the same problems.

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Petpettails123 [2012-08-24 03:10:53 +0000 UTC]

Sucks, right.

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AltaredFox In reply to Petpettails123 [2012-08-24 03:12:15 +0000 UTC]

It really does. I have this plan tomorrow at school to come up to the two girls that used to be my best friends and telling them I'm done with the drama and I don't want to be friends, but I don't want to have to not be near my friends when they're not around and have to be away from them at lunch and during classes.

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Petpettails123 In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-24 03:17:00 +0000 UTC]

That's a good plan...I hope things go well for you

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AltaredFox In reply to Petpettails123 [2012-08-24 03:21:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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idontknowhy [2012-08-24 03:06:13 +0000 UTC]

hmm

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AltaredFox In reply to idontknowhy [2012-08-24 03:07:23 +0000 UTC]

Hmm?

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idontknowhy In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-24 03:08:27 +0000 UTC]

scuse mee
*agreed

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AltaredFox In reply to idontknowhy [2012-08-24 03:10:19 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha alright. Thank you~

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idontknowhy In reply to AltaredFox [2012-08-24 16:28:31 +0000 UTC]

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