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Published: 2008-02-02 23:43:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 160; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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The overly large blur grew larger by the millisecond. Thundering down thestreet toward me and the fence-post which happen to exist with myself
alone. It was two seconds before. I was able to turn faster then the
speed of light to face my impending doom. And in those two seconds I saw
what seemed impossible to witness. Masses upon masses of common objects,
just things you can see in a house or lying in the streets. People were
nested among the objects. Children, cars, adults, and animals frozen in
position crowded together with the rest of the masses.
And now it was my turn.
I made an effort to escape such a horrible fate. Starting toward the
remainder of the bus-stop which already had a fraction of it bonding
with the masses. I was swept inside the bus-stop and then pressed
against the rest of the objects. I felt a wave of concrete and dried tar
wash over my face and the outward facing part of my body. I could not
feel the weight of the rest of the masses as we all were submerged into
the street only to resurface on the opposite side from which I started.
We were rolling. This mass of people and objects were moving in unison;
similar to that of a slow light-weight bowling ball moving towards
pins. It was at the same time I had my epiphany of our movement that I
ceased my overly loud confused screaming, and noticed a joy.
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Comments: 6
Kensou13 [2008-02-05 03:39:55 +0000 UTC]
So last time we found the guy caught up with how mundane his life is, right? And now he is in the middle of what I think it's a manifestation. And the end "... noticed a joy." reminds me a part of some comic you made time ago. Something about a ray of hope I guess.
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alteregoAtlas In reply to Kensou13 [2008-02-05 19:55:44 +0000 UTC]
Ah yes, this comic thingy Don't like that comic's beginning really
lol yes actually I have made several of my comics and stories have a plot of taking the normal and having something un... normal happen ... ">.> er something along those lines
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minibubble [2008-02-03 17:32:13 +0000 UTC]
wow! this is really good! I honestly really like it i don't know how to put words to what i'm thinking of it...it's just really...unique? is that the right word...i'm not sure just...wow seriously well done!
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alteregoAtlas In reply to minibubble [2008-02-05 19:19:41 +0000 UTC]
Yays glad you liked it... well sorta, I know it's pretty weird.
Didn't make any mistakes this time .... did I
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minibubble In reply to alteregoAtlas [2008-02-06 15:56:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah i really like it! weird is certaintly not a bad thing lol XD
meh nothing major if you really want to be sure it's perfect just read over it again. i do that with my stuff but i try not to do it too often because every time i do i just want to rip it to pieces it's painful to read your own stuff sometimes isn't it?
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alteregoAtlas In reply to minibubble [2008-02-06 16:50:08 +0000 UTC]
No joke **thinks back to essay due last week
Is it hard to follow at all ... its hard for me to read it without thinking ... er well my thoughts ">.>
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