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Part 1: fav.me/d6x12irPart 2: fav.me/d6x12zo
Part 3: You are here
Q: Is everything you're drawing going to be mindscrew or what?
A: I BLAME SONG LYRICS
Wow, this round is even more incomprehensible than the last one. It wasn't supposed to be like this, but it's hard to get a story across when half the words have been chosen for you... In fact, the "writing" portion of this took longer than last round, since I spent way too long on trying to find a song. Anyhow, I hope it's at leat semi-comprehensible. Basically this round boils down to "oh look I found the perfect song! Wait, it has to be in English, crap" and "I should listen to more songs in English".
Things I've learned this round:
- how to draw explosions
- how to bastardize song lyrics so they say what you want them to say
- I NEED TO STOP SPENDING SO MUCH TIME ON BFOI GLURGH GONNA FAIL ALL MY CLASSES
Tom Swift: fav.me/d5cc2vo
Keenan Snow: fav.me/d599ipf
Drake Minami: fav.me/d5ieujc
Song: The Delgados - The Light Before We Land
Also known as: The opening of Gunslinger Girl . Of course I listen to songs that's not from anime, what are you talking about *whistles innocently*
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On the likely chance that I'm not good enough with storytelling to get across the backstory while only using song lyrics:
Sometime after moving to Sinnoh, Pory gained sentience. Tom's coding project on exploiting the porygon2's learning algorithm to give the virtual bird pokemon feelings had worked. For Pory, the next few days were a blur. The porygon2 did not know how to process the new information. The snowflakes falling from the sky, the way Tom complained about the cold while wearing five layers of sweaters and a scarf--every small thing gained a new significance, some how.
(happiness? bliss? the porygon2 had not yet found the words to describe its new knowledge)
But Tom looked troubled when he found out about the new development, and said that there was something Pory had to know: a message from a xatu, about the future.
All of a sudden, the drinking bird glitched in critical error and evolved into a porygon-Z...
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Comments: 8
SSTG [2013-12-07 21:59:27 +0000 UTC]
/CLUTCHES FACE
HI I REALLY ENJOY ALL YOUR ENTRIES
Personally, I love your mindfck comics the best 8) your story came across really well considering if you struggled with finding lyrics- also I really like the static effects and how you've laid out the panels ehehe vwv NICELY DONE
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Amorphous-blob In reply to SSTG [2013-12-08 19:48:01 +0000 UTC]
>.< /carefully removes from face
HI OH WOW THANKS!!! >.< I'm glad that someone actually enjoys the mindscrew I'm barfing out, haha...!
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Digimast [2013-12-07 19:23:28 +0000 UTC]
You totally nailed Keenan
Congratulations, your song fit the story perfectly and your style was delightful! Also... I love you PorygonZ
I think Keenan will become Team Plasma only to convince Tom to release it, so he can then leave the Team and capture Pory himself X3
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Amorphous-blob In reply to Digimast [2013-12-08 19:53:59 +0000 UTC]
Yay! I gave him the (only) speaking line because he's supposed to be analytical and it seemed like something he would say... I'm glad I didn't write him out of character, haha. Also I think if you do that Tom and Pory will be very sad at you. At the very least, Tom will probably get his Zorua to Illusion into a girl and troll Keenan.
Anyhow, I'm looking forward to your entry
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Digimast In reply to Amorphous-blob [2013-12-08 22:10:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God! That illusion would be just the perfect weapon against Keenan XD
My entry will be out in a few minutes
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Eledora [2013-12-07 15:56:30 +0000 UTC]
Woah it's amazing how you can still tell a meaningful story with the song lyrics limit ;w; I love how you presented the story with actions and expressions without relying on the dialogues too much on this one >w<
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Amorphous-blob In reply to Eledora [2013-12-08 19:58:29 +0000 UTC]
>-< Thanks!Β The reason I don't have much dialogue was because I had trouble with the song lyric limit, haha... I can't stand how awkward it sounds when I try to use songs as dialogue, so I just had nobody speak instead
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