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Published: 2013-06-14 09:06:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 125; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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I write poems in the hope that
you'll read them out loud,
because emotions are Build-A-Bear
animals with a special noise for each.
If hearing yourself cry makes you wanna
scream makes you wanna
smack your lips shut makes you wanna
giggle makes you want to
cry some more,
I'm all ears.
I want the uncut diamond,
and I will dig if I must.
Yes:
Give me the raw and the real —
we're rolling,
and I don't wanna miss a single second
of the awkwardbeatiful
erupting from our lips in ink transcended
into silence.
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Comments: 5
Yes, that's one of the messages in this poem, but there's another message that conflicts with it: that my real goal is not ink, but sound. Writing ("ink") is beautiful, but sound (and the lack thereof) is far more powerful ("ink transcended").
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Hmm...to my shame i shall admitt that this one didn`t really make much sense to me...
if im reading this right, it seems to me that you are saying you want to write using raw emotions, yes?
no planning or anything of the sort involved, just pure emotion transfering through the pen, into the ink, and onto paper. (or in this case, keyboard)
is this right or am i completly wrong in this regard?
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The last stanza is charged with the emotion that you've been building up. Very well done.
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The pleasure is all mine.
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