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Published: 2011-11-19 04:35:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 637; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 6
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Without LonlinessI get this feeling
when I'm sitting
in a corner
someone should
be here
I look around
I'm the only one alone
now I feel worse and
I continue to sit alone.
I see you walk by
stare at my lonliness
i can't tell
the look in your eyes
you go on your way.
I see you sit down
in a corner
like me
I look at you in your lonliness
I see no sadness
in your eyes.
Suddenly I feel
No more sadness
I sit there alone
but without lonliness.
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Comments: 8
LadyData [2012-01-28 00:46:44 +0000 UTC]
You poem is very relatable I used to be depressed from being lonely but once I got used to it I grew to appreciate it
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splover22 [2011-11-19 14:28:32 +0000 UTC]
This is your first poem? It's AWESOME
You have great potential
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Androidseventeen32 In reply to splover22 [2011-11-19 15:32:55 +0000 UTC]
thank you so much!!!! love your icon!
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splover22 In reply to Androidseventeen32 [2011-11-19 18:14:36 +0000 UTC]
Thanks (about the icon)
I didn't make it,though. She did----->
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