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Published: 2006-03-11 03:24:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 1139; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 168
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just EXPERIMENTATIONfor reminder, i need good constuctive comments
if you say that the render needs to be fixed,
tell me how i should fix it to make the piece
in your favor so i can explore different types
of artistic abilities.
thanks,
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Comments: 18
those blurry thingies in the top looks weird 
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The colours a bit boring. I think you should be a bit more ambitious with the colours.
Nice render
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the concept is very nice, though I think there's too much glow (as in too big). I personally think it would look much better with a smaller glow. But overall it looks great.
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the perspective could be real good, but the bg is quite flat and could use some more work.
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Er... Just make it a bit smoother, & you're pretty much all good. Oh, & the that odd shade of brick-pink should go, as well.
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i like it, kinda looks like a bridge is exploding, wicked render but i not sure if something was exploding that it would explode in perfectly square peices
i think you should take out that lens flareish thing in the top right corner right on the render, kinda pointless and weird looking
pretty sweet piece bro, good job
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nonono bro's i think it looks great as it is, aight? i think its a prefect piece which you can take as an example on how real abstract should be
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Yeah, the glow should go....and rotate it 90 degrees right. Great work!
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Great Work ! keep it up.
very nice mellow tone of colors
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Lose the glows. Never ever put Lighten glows on shit, it ruins it. It needs more texture, depth, and better perspective.
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thats your opinion.thank you for it.
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