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Angsty-Poet β€” How Beautiful She Is
Published: 2007-03-01 23:38:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 328; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 0
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Description A beautiful woman
A goddess by an undefining nature
The search for perfection
Stops and ends with her
Skillful hands that write on paper
Words that can make one
Cry out in utmost agony
or burst forth in most melodious song
Lines that form the kind of art
Society is deprived of too often in these days
Lips that form sounds
That you cannot hear
But feel deep within your soul
Those lips, oh those perfectly formed lips
They part to reveal a voice
Not of the angels
But of a kind of perfection
That we have not heard here
If only I could touch upon
This flawless, fallen being
If only I could strive
to be like her
Then I think that this world,
It would accept me
And I would have the decency
to change…
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Comments: 43

commonshade22 [2007-03-28 01:09:23 +0000 UTC]

poetry doesn't have to make sense
like other art doesn't necessarily have to make sense
(i'm pretty sure certain peices i've put up make no sense at all )
it is quite good dear

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Angsty-Poet In reply to commonshade22 [2007-04-05 23:39:07 +0000 UTC]

lolz Once I was supposed to right a poem for Geoff about heaven, and my sister told me I should just right "Heaven, pretty light, no more EVIL" and give it to him I think he would have had a heartattack right then and there!

Well, don't ask what really brought that story to mind from your comment it just did

Wendy

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commonshade22 In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-04-06 04:31:59 +0000 UTC]

lol omg i would have loved to witness that
(in all the best humorous ways of course, i don't want geoff to die...)...

it did indeed

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Angsty-Poet In reply to commonshade22 [2007-04-08 23:17:42 +0000 UTC]

I don't want him to die either...but, secretly, I would love to witness that too

Wendy

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commonshade22 In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-04-09 00:37:53 +0000 UTC]

wahaha then we are in agreement

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plusnia [2007-03-17 19:10:26 +0000 UTC]

I am... at a loss for words.

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Angsty-Poet In reply to plusnia [2007-03-23 00:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Awwww hunny You shouldn't be It isn't very good >< I just wanted you to know I care and that you are beautiful

I miss you

Wendy

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plusnia In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-23 01:40:25 +0000 UTC]

I miss you too! And I loved the poem, dearly.

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Angsty-Poet In reply to plusnia [2007-03-25 01:04:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you love =3

Love you UBER =3

It feels so great to call you Uber

Wendy

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plusnia In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-25 04:00:33 +0000 UTC]



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Aiah [2007-03-09 16:56:39 +0000 UTC]

Oh, better late than never! A beautiful poem written to a friend

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Aiah [2007-03-09 20:47:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Anne

Wendy

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Aiah In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-10 09:01:02 +0000 UTC]

Welcome!

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mesmeric-revelation [2007-03-02 22:06:54 +0000 UTC]

very beautiful...and very sweet i wish i could write sweet things, but everything comes out very morbid

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Angsty-Poet In reply to mesmeric-revelation [2007-03-03 04:52:57 +0000 UTC]

That is the way that it used to be for me when I wrote...but I think that was because I was never truely feeling happy....I've been trying my best to write only from inspiration and I suppose I've just been getting the happy kind lately...although I do prefer my morbid writing myself

Thank you


Wendy

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mesmeric-revelation In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-03 15:41:18 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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pintobean122 [2007-03-02 20:16:27 +0000 UTC]

very lovely! you are a natural poet

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Angsty-Poet In reply to pintobean122 [2007-03-02 20:20:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. It is nice to know that I am thought of as such I always thought that I had to try quite hard to be able to write things... but maybe...it comes more natural than I had though

Thank you again

Wendy

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pintobean122 In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-02 20:25:32 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome

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Pokeaholic [2007-03-02 18:17:56 +0000 UTC]

aww
lovely very beautiful and heartfelt im sure

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Pokeaholic [2007-03-02 20:21:46 +0000 UTC]

It was But it seems lately that most of my heartfelt stuff is just not coming out right on paper... maybe I have just no big inspirationg yet ...who knows

JENNI IS HOTT!!!

Wendy

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Pokeaholic In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-03 22:29:31 +0000 UTC]

this one did!
i seem to lack the ideas as well
aww

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Pokeaholic [2007-03-04 20:48:15 +0000 UTC]

Maybe we aren't eating enough cake?

Wendy

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Pokeaholic In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-04 21:16:37 +0000 UTC]

does cake contain inspiration?

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Pokeaholic [2007-03-06 00:36:53 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes it can...especially for a cake decorate

Wendy

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Pokeaholic In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-06 21:44:20 +0000 UTC]

=O
indeed
it never occured to me!

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Pokeaholic [2007-03-07 20:19:35 +0000 UTC]

It did not occur to me either...at least not until you asked me if cake could be inspiring

Wendy

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Pokeaholic In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-08 17:50:53 +0000 UTC]

haha lol
well
i guess i inspired you too
hehe

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DrowningByWords [2007-03-02 16:48:08 +0000 UTC]

beautiful, moving and uplifiting
a wonderful gift i'm sure she'll love


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Angsty-Poet In reply to DrowningByWords [2007-03-02 20:44:43 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the encouragement. I truely hope that you are right Russ.

And thank you for your kind words

Wendy

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BenSoulstone [2007-03-02 03:45:17 +0000 UTC]

Splendid! This is definately a great present. You write so well.

Fave!

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Angsty-Poet In reply to BenSoulstone [2007-03-02 20:38:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I never thought that I wrote all that well...but I did try to get my emotions across. Thank you once again Ben hunny

Wendy

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BenSoulstone In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-02 22:54:08 +0000 UTC]

You're mighty welcome, Wendy dahling.

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Jiendo [2007-03-02 00:21:20 +0000 UTC]

Its absolutly wonderfull!! Hope she likes it ^^

But but but your an amazing person to!

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Jiendo [2007-03-02 20:36:09 +0000 UTC]

I hope that she likes it too!

THank you but truly, I'm not amazing I'm just a person

Wendy

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Jiendo In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-02 21:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Then to me your an amazing person

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Jiendo [2007-03-03 04:54:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Leonie (did I spell that right?)

Wendy

PS: Did you know that your sign is Leo and your name is Leonie? which contains Leo in it at least, I'm pretty sure your sign is Leo O___o

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Jiendo In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-03 12:08:27 +0000 UTC]

LOL yes,..my parents thought of that

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Jiendo [2007-03-06 01:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Seriously? I just thought it was a coincidence

Wendy

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Jiendo In reply to Angsty-Poet [2007-03-06 09:41:54 +0000 UTC]

That's what I always thought to

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Angsty-Poet In reply to Jiendo [2007-03-07 03:33:10 +0000 UTC]

Guess that we were both wrong huh?

Wendy

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SwissDutchess [2007-03-02 00:06:04 +0000 UTC]

What a wonderful poem for your friend!

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Angsty-Poet In reply to SwissDutchess [2007-03-02 20:35:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I hope that she feels the same way about it.

Wendy

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