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Published: 2015-02-24 20:48:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 383; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description I hide.
I hide my voice.
I get afraid.
I get depressed.
I think of you.
I am jealous of you.
I think you are yourself.
I want to believe you are free.
I want to believe I can hear your voice.
I was wrong.
You hide too.
You are even more afraid than me.
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Comments: 4

XjustsomerandomgirlX [2015-03-09 16:45:03 +0000 UTC]

I love this!! The grammar is perfect, and it conveys a lot of emotion in very few words. It's awesome

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Appeldust In reply to XjustsomerandomgirlX [2015-03-09 18:49:12 +0000 UTC]

 

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Squidgeroonio [2015-02-24 20:51:33 +0000 UTC]

I love this It's a really good, emotion fuelled piece! And grammar seems fine - the only thing I can spot as obvious is the 'You hide to.' would be 'You hide too.' other than that I love the structure, and wording!!! Woop nice job!    

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Appeldust In reply to Squidgeroonio [2015-02-24 20:56:45 +0000 UTC]

thank you! 
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