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Published: 2016-01-25 02:17:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 38819; Favourites: 360; Downloads: 98
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Fooled once, shame on Jayshack. Fooled twice, shame on Amanda. Fooled thrice...yup, shame still falls solidly on Amanda, like a shovelful of snow.
Based on a true story.
Request for Jayshack (characters shown are 18+)
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A bit interesting to follow, if I may offer a critique, I feel like you can do more with your characters facial expressions to help sell the piece, I am mostly saying that as the male character was very hard to read expression wise
though this critique is saying that a more "extreme" expressions should assist in story telling, like if in the first panel the male character had more of a wicked grin or a thinking face then what happens next would have more forshadowing rather then "this is a wedgie comic so you know what happens next"
still liked the piece though
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Thanks for the feedback--I do often have trouble getting expressions down right, even given a story to illustrate. This is, btw, based on a true story, by the requester's account, and I have a tendency to make an impish grin look downright evil. I guess it was a mixture of artistic ineptitude on my part and not wanting to offend the guy.
I'll practice the faces, but I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway
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I can't speak for the guy, but if it was me I would have let you have a field day with expressions 
All you can do is practice, do it for yourself and not for the fans
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Once the last requests are done, that's just what I plan to do, with one exception--the whole reason I get to do this is because of the people who've boosted my confidence in the first place. What I do, I want to do for everyone's enjoyment, including mine. : )
My mistake was forgetting to make sure I enjoyed the work more than I felt compelled by promises--I am the one with all the cards, in the end. But for me personally, forgetting entirely about everyone out there who gave me those cards, who gave a damn when I needed one, would be no less of a mistake.
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Haha awesome thanks a ton man. It came out amazing. Totally worth the wait.
Also, yes this is a completely true story. Although looking at the comic now I realize I forgot to tell you a bunch of details like why she was hiding behind the shed lol. Might write the full story of this event on my account sometime. Be a fun start to my writing.
Once again thanks a lot. Really loved this.
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You do that--it'd be awesome. And no problem, I'm glad you liked it
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Ah trust. Years to build, one well placed wedgie to destroy.
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