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Description I hold her close to me, feeling her warmth course thru my very soul, the feel of her closeness like the warm rays of the sun on a frosted meadow after a dreadful winter.  I feel her breath, slow; steady.  My being cherishing her every touch; warm, loving.  The scent of her fill my spirit, embracing my every sense, and her hair lightly caressing my skin, supple and light as the finest silk woven by nature herself.  My arms, wrapped tightly and lovingly around her, seemed so at home, like they were meant to do just this, and nothing much else.

I painfully pull back, if not just to see her again with my sight; my hands lightly caressing her arms as I steady myself opposite her, taking in with my eyes the sight of her in front of me; she smiles a soft yet captivating smile at me, and I reply with a light touch on her sun kissed skin, my fingers tracing unseen lines on her cheek, my movements as if mesmerized, yet conscious of every sensation it feels as my fingers gently and lightly caress her cheek, tracing her jaw line.  I lean forward, and whisper sweet nothing into her ear, she giggles softly at my words, and gently plants a light kiss on my cheek as her reply, resting her hand against my cheek, her touch captivating me.  My thoughts block out everything but her; as I see myself in her eyes, drifting back to her, like a flower drawn to the sun, invigorating itself in the sunlight.

I lean my head on her shoulder, and I feel her smile as I snuggle my head between her jaw and her lovely shoulder, my hand wrapping tightly, yet gently, around her.  Her hand rises gracefully and caresses my hair gently, lightly, making slow, repeated movements and shapeless designs on my hair.  Closing my eyes, I breathe in deep; sighing as her scent fills me up yet again, thanking creation for such heavenliness on earth.
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Comments: 33

Kott93 [2009-01-12 19:15:36 +0000 UTC]

So you're also a writer... dammn you talented man

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archseer In reply to Kott93 [2009-01-12 21:52:45 +0000 UTC]

hehe, thank you so much

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PzychoStock [2009-01-05 23:10:57 +0000 UTC]

Are you bilingual? or just learned a lot of English? or do you have English as an official language in Malaysia? I'm so illiterate... lol. Whatever... about the text..

Very lovely text.. It's lovely to see that men have such lovely feelings everynow and then... sometimes you guys don't show anything at all, but yes, I guess sometimes you feel a very big connection with your significant other while doing that. I could even pictured myself with my babe doing that while I was reading it... and I guess he must feel about the same because he often says.. "You feel lovely, or you are lovely, or you smell lovely" any of the three or all of them together in the same 5 minutes of cuddling

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-06 00:54:20 +0000 UTC]

well, i'd like to say that im bilingual, which to me is a crime, with the amount of courses i've taken, i should at least be able to converse in 4

thank you so much for your comment, i'm glad you think so. This one was written with the memory of my ex, so it was easy for me to come up with everything. To me, writing doesn't come as easy as image manipulation, but i do express myself better through writing. You'd be surprise though, i haven't been fortunate enough to have had a significant other that appreciates the way i can express myself toward her, nope, not joking

the whole complete storyline isn't what one would expect from this very small excerpt from it though, hehe

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-07 02:54:12 +0000 UTC]

Well.. those moments are able to be felt even when things are wrong between the two of you.. those are just moments of connection, the more often they happen the more longer would the relationship last.

But did you ever show her this? did you wrote this after a fight? lol.. because then it would be useless.. you just have to tell her when you feel it.. or write a letter with this and give it to her everytime she makes you feel like that.. then I bet it would last forever.

Yeah, Well, you may find a significant other soon! love is just like that it comes when you less expect it!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-07 03:02:13 +0000 UTC]

she knows about my ability to write, she doesnt quite like what she terms, my 'writer's words' , go figure, its the past anyway

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-08 01:56:06 +0000 UTC]

Ohh... then she may complained of too many words but few acts?

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-08 03:42:47 +0000 UTC]

nope, she just complained. I was tired of both doing and saying. Glad that's over and done with. She tried to re-initiate contact a few times, but this has to be one of the occasions that the saying, "good riddance to bad rubbish" is apt

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-10 21:28:55 +0000 UTC]

Yeah.. once it's over it's over, it's useless to try it again, usually once the relationship broke, it's hard to fix, unless you both master the ability to pretend nothing happened!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-10 21:55:44 +0000 UTC]

haha, ya, well, it went on, on and off over 5 years, somehow, she would know when i wasnt seeing anyone... weirrrdd

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-10 22:04:34 +0000 UTC]

My god.. that's a long time.. lol!! well it seems she in the end knew what she lost when you both ended up your relatioship.. however... time to find another significant other.. although those are never searched for, those just appear when one doesn't need them or expect them

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-10 22:10:31 +0000 UTC]

well, thats what my friend said about all that. so true enough, after it was over, and sometime after that, the texts and the calls came...

haha, ya, i'm too lazy to look for one anyway, lol.

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-15 01:46:14 +0000 UTC]

And love comes to you, one shouldn't search for love!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-15 02:03:00 +0000 UTC]

yeeep, i agree with that plus, it reinforces my blaise attitude toward it

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-15 02:05:02 +0000 UTC]

blaise? I don't know what that means yet!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-15 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]

its not spelled correctly for one thing

i think one of those vowels is misplaced, and hmm, the e is accented. dang keyboard

which is why im finding the russian language to be such a gem every letter gets pronounced, hehehe

anyway, what i meant to say was nonchalant but that other word came out

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-15 02:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Well with this useless knowledge I am acquiring in languages ... I can tell you almost 100% that nonchalant comes from french.. but I haven't got the slightest idea of what does that mean either! .. as I told... you.. useless degree!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-15 02:26:59 +0000 UTC]

we can trade degrees then me wantz yourz

sounds something like its from french

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-22 14:29:46 +0000 UTC]

lol.. I haven't my degree yet.. hopefully at the end of the year... let's see.. what is your degree about?.. I may consider it.. if it's cool enough! which might be, everything must be cooler!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-22 14:45:35 +0000 UTC]

i have a bachelor of science (which somehow abbreviates as BS) in marketing, boring

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-24 04:18:26 +0000 UTC]

I never understood what Bachelor is.. is that like a degree??.. or is it a degree?.. lol. I wouldn't like to change it for something inferior.. you know.. uhm.. marketing.. well marketing is useful.. you should be able to sell things to people, then?.. that could be useful for me..

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-24 09:18:29 +0000 UTC]

well, only reason why i took marketing was i had THOUGHT (apparently incorrectly) that it has the least to do with maths, smart move Riz

i really wanted to do digital imaging and animation, becoz thats what i love, but i didnt have the $$ for it, ah well

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PzychoStock In reply to archseer [2009-01-24 15:38:04 +0000 UTC]

Why don't you do it now? I guess you don't even have to pay for someone to teach you, having in account how many tutorials there are out there! and specially in DA!

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archseer In reply to PzychoStock [2009-01-24 19:15:08 +0000 UTC]

yeep, thats true thats one of the reasons why i actually decided to be active on DA around sep or oct last year

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RedEarthofTerra [2009-01-04 23:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Lovely writing. Great visuals. Good job!
For critique, I would recommend editing it for grammar, etc. first. And watch for repetitive language.

Otherwise great job.

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archseer In reply to RedEarthofTerra [2009-01-05 02:28:04 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much glad you think so. aha yes, grammar, me bad at dat , thank you for your generous comment

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RedEarthofTerra In reply to archseer [2009-01-05 03:58:11 +0000 UTC]

No prob.

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IRISHWSDM [2009-01-01 18:57:43 +0000 UTC]

Warm and descriptive well said

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archseer In reply to IRISHWSDM [2009-01-01 21:11:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Villenueve [2008-12-31 19:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Excellent work!

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archseer In reply to Villenueve [2009-01-01 03:02:02 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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xeena-dragonkizz [2008-12-31 09:50:59 +0000 UTC]

That is touching words..suggestive and loving, with a lot of tenderness..well done my friend!!

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archseer In reply to xeena-dragonkizz [2008-12-31 09:55:33 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much glad you think so

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