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Published: 2008-11-06 09:47:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 436; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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In these eyes that are thine...more than eyes, they are to me,
A breathtaking sunrise, beautiful and pure;
A brilliant sunset, loud yet calming;
A star studded sky, awesome and peaceful;
A full moon, haunting and serene;
Should I say more
Or let them captivate me,
These eyes that are thineβ¦
full view pls
~CRoWNsToCK , !homnoct-stock , ~darkrose42-stock , ~loustock
and a special thanks to ~Doodoox for allowing me the use of her wonderful picture
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it is isn't it! 
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e.. as perhaps you have noticed from my gallery I love eyes .. I like this image much .. i see the reflection ..! sorry for my english...
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thank you so much, i'm glad you notice the reflections in it and like this.
yes eyes, one of the things i'm a big sucker for
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oh.. yeah. now I've seen a kid or a person on the right side of it I didn't notice yesterday! Great!! very very good. And the poem... I was expecting to read William Shakespeare after it.. that's why I asked you. Lol.. I loe the use of Middle English pronouns... thy.. thine.. it just looks very elegant and stylish!
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thank you
don't know if it comes out clear, theres a guy (the one u saw), the moon and a rising sun on the left side, hence, the world, getting lost in her eyes
ya, middle english, it sounds way better when i had changed it to some form of that 
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ahhh yes, the moon on top of him, and the sun on the opposite side, yes... wow.. you made it soooo well, at first I didn't notice the figure in the eyes.. unless you pay a lot of attention you don't recognise a thing.. and specially if you don't try the full view! 
Yeah... you must be very glad...I really don't tend to like poetry... only that of Shakespeare and similar one..
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haha, ya, if you don't try the full view those will definitely be missed
definitely am very glad
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Very cool eye! did you do anything in the iris... or is just like that?. Did you write the poem?
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thank you
ya, i made the iris my canvas
and yep, the poem is 100% mine, hehe
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