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Published: 2009-04-14 20:51:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 1070; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 14
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Description photo by JSA Photography
editing and model is me
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Comments: 4

VADELLE [2009-04-29 23:39:12 +0000 UTC]

You are very wonderful lady. Thank for the best veins, passion gothic real and sublime wave magic. You help my heart and I wish more of your vampiric fuzz to me. I enjoy your fantasy and I like your friendship sexy bloody angel.. Keep in hell* Lovely desires of lust x

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pendragon93 [2009-04-14 23:16:27 +0000 UTC]

I'm not that great at critiquing art. First thing I noticed was the lamp. Thought it was a little odd in an outdoors shot. Perhaps she carries the light she will need to get where-ever her destination will be. The tilt of the landscape adds a nice flare when it comes to the luggage. Luggage shows travel, change, movement. The slant makes it feel that the road is a tad easier to travel, since it's no longer uphill. The nudity would suggest new, unexplored territory or perhaps even a lust for the new change. The lace netting means she's still wrapped up in something, however it may not be a struggle or something she needs to unravel. The landscape and color tones can symbolize depth, the big picture, even perhaps a grand presence of something, a spiritual journey. The first thing to enter my mind with the green tones is a slight poisoned spiritual journey. The dramatic flare of it is very touching.

On another note, I love the tare in the pantyhose. Hehe! And so love the expression on your face!

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TVDzombie [2009-04-14 23:06:31 +0000 UTC]

I cannot seem to find the right words that would be fitting enough but I will say this......I really like this. It is something I could see hanging on my wall. It is not just an image of a beautiful woman but of other things as well. I like the angle of the photo as well. It has a calming feel to it as well.

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The---Unknown [2009-04-14 21:01:19 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, i'll comment on what i've think you've done, since i don't know what you exactly have edited.

One thing i notice straight away, is that the image is slightly slanted, and your standing straight up, which in my opinion is making you look slightly out of place but at the same time, it adds more focus to you. The blackness around you, i don't know if thats a piece of clothing around you or if you've done it, or if it's a piece of clothing you've edited, but maybe if you smudge the edges of it out, so it looks like it is fading into the background. The choice of the thicker border was a good choice. If you've done the lighting/darkening in the photo also it's very nicely done. The modelling pose choice is very good, and probably is the only one that would have fit that photo. I also like how the lamp put in the is dark at the bottom and fitting the background and the top of it is white, and blends with the clouds so adds a nice addition to the photo.

Overall good job, but i don't know what you edited, or what was already there, so yeah :/ Few things i think you could improve on.

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