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ArrowDesigns — First Abstract Piece
Published: 2004-09-21 03:28:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 614; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 177
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As the title says, Its my first abstract piece. This is totally different then what I am use to, Im use to doing grunge but I kind of always wanted to try abstract. Now I know the bottom right sucks horribly but Its my first so bare with me, Useful comments and suggestion will be taken in affect so please feel free to share your knowledge.Render By: 8thwonder (You can see his work at [link] )
ps: +watch / +fav are more then appreciated.
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Comments: 7
This looks pretty good mate. Some definite potential in you. 
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ok. this is very nice. the colors are wonderful and the brushing is very good too, however at 340x500 the image is very small.
also i thin there is too much brushing going on especially in the bottom right. too bright, which covers the render and make it invisible.
your brushing is good just tone it down a little.
well thats it this is my critique hope you find it useful
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Thanks for the comments bakka, I will work on less brushing. The size was just for fun, I was thinking of it more as a splash then anything else. Not to mention its my first so I thought something small would work best for me.
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Okay I updated it a little, I made the bottom right less bright and I think it looks much better now. What does everyone think?
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